Crispin's 8th poem

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    Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 00:56

    Forest

    He watches...that everescent green of the grass...
    embedding itself...like a blanket standing there in amazement...gazing...and not being phased by the bussling town...
    the wind brushing through his skin...like being permeable...like a new born hound
    He could spend hours...forever basking in nature's beauty looking upon the flowers, he cares for this place he found...

    Showing his most soft side to this forest...
    he caresses it like nothing but the best
    tenderly not missing one child of nature..
    this man thinks of them as his chosen pleasure
    Forever...splendor..and merry more
    at this he...yet adores...
    not wanting nothing more..
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Fri Aug 01 2008, 01:58

    From the heart a powerful and moving poem with a great last line
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Fri Aug 01 2008, 01:58

    Puppy Dog Eyes This is the great one! Well, I mean, they're all great but.....well, you know what I mean xDD

    Loveddddd it~
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:02

    lol thank you NF & kitaro.
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:06

    your write good im just pointing it out
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:10

    thanks for ur comments^__^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:36

    well if comments make you keep writing then there gonna keep coming
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:41

    *smiles*yeah the comments are great, very supportive...along with my inspiration i know i will continue to write more.
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:42

    just dont stop writing
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by AtaruSabrMaster on Fri Aug 01 2008, 11:48

    nice ^_^

    the second part is the best
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Claud-kun on Fri Aug 01 2008, 12:56

    Pretty nice Cris. I will look forward for the next ones you have in mind ^_^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 13:01

    thank you claud^__^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by judai12 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 14:01

    sooo good cris i love it
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by GL on Sat Aug 02 2008, 17:22

    wow great job! o.o
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Sat Aug 02 2008, 18:14

    Spectacular work! I could almost imagine the forest in my head
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 02 2008, 18:27

    aww, thank you titan^_^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Choushi on Sat Aug 02 2008, 23:16

    yea this is crazy good
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Aug 03 2008, 03:41

    thank you babe^_^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Sun Aug 03 2008, 13:09

    I love it, so cute ^^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Aug 03 2008, 13:16

    ^__^thank u sori^^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Dancing Mist on Sun Aug 03 2008, 21:16

    Awwwws~<33
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by amaterasu on Mon Aug 04 2008, 13:03

    that's a pretty good and powerful poem there crispin!
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Aug 04 2008, 13:09

    thank you ama.^^
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by Akia on Mon Aug 04 2008, 13:40

    Puppy Dog Eyes "I really liked it!" ~Sings "Flowers flowers all around, beauty growing from the ground"~
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    Re: Crispin's 8th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Aug 04 2008, 13:42

    thank you akia^^

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