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    A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Mon Jul 28 2008, 05:17

    the set date is sometime in the future after everything has dissapeared...only a few people live..

    He walks down the road looking at his surroundings, he knows everything he once knew is gone, he stops and looks up at the bland sky that shows only a few moons and a star shooting across it. A sound is heard in the distance as he quickly snaps back to reality.

    The sound draws closer and closer to him on the deserted road, he begins to ball his hand up into a fist. He can see a small gleam coming down the road, seems whatever it is has some sort of vehicle. He was wondering about that because all forms of transportation were destroyed in the war.

    The vehicle comes to a stop about 110m away, he looks confused and then hears something in his head.."I see you there Jecht, how is it going, you don't remember me do ya"

    Jecht falls to the pavement gripping his temples in agony "GET OUTTA MY HEAD!"

    The vehicle starts up again and the person gets closer and closer, Jecht can start to make out the outline of the person, his eyes widened up in amazement..could it be..
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Jul 29 2008, 01:51

    previously...The vehicle starts up again and the person gets
    closer and closer, Jecht can start to make out the outline of the
    person, his eyes widened up in amazement..could it be..

    Jecht gets up quickly and runs towards the vehicle as fast as his body allows him to. His eyes flash an assortment of colors and his feet begin to make cracks in the floor.

    The vehicle blows up as the person jumps off it and strikes a kick at Jecht. A direct hit! Jecht falls back leaving trails in the pavement, no way he was going to stand for this!

    Jecht gets back up and runs at the figure striking fatal points, but nothing happened, he realized he wasnt going to win this battle. Jecht gets on his knees and looks up at the figure ready to deliver a fatal blows, but suddenly, the figure dissapears and Jecht passes out.

    He awoke several hours later inside a small hut with a low lit fire, what had happened while he was passed out...
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by namine on Tue Jul 29 2008, 02:58

    KEEP WRITING!
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Jul 29 2008, 04:20

    uhhh, thankz and i will?
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Wed Jul 30 2008, 02:21

    previously-He awoke several hours later inside a small hut with a low lit fire, what had happened while he was passed out...

    Jecht grips his head and closes his eyes, everything was a flash. He remembers the fight bits and pieces everytime the person would get close enough to see, his vision would fade, its like his memory erased bits and pieces of what had happened.

    Jecht opens his eyes again and a women is hovering over him with a bowl of soup, Jecht jumps about a foot and crashes back onto the floor. "Ummm, thank you very much for rescuing me, i'm Jecht and you are...."

    "You don't need to know who I am young one, just have some soup you will be outta here in no time". states the shrill old women.

    He gave her a look of discern but sat up and tok the soup from her and began eating it. In a muffled tone Jecht begins to speak, " So why didya help me anyways? Am i some super cool person who gets to defend the world?!?!"

    "No, you were lygin on the floor bleeding like a wimp so i decided to take you in until you were better."

    Jecht gave her a look of sadness and sorrow, he wasn't too happy with that repsonse. "You could've at least lied to me and said i was important..."

    "I could've, but that would make me a liar young man, now eat up, you crowding my house up!"

    He looks at the soup and shrugs before returning to chowing down on it...
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Sat Aug 02 2008, 08:46

    how is it sooo far?
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 12 2008, 03:16

    anyone???/...likei thate it
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Tue Aug 12 2008, 03:20

    XD XD

    I like the old woman.
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 12 2008, 03:23

    thank
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 00:28

    previously: Jecht gave her a look of sadness and sorrow, he
    wasn't too happy with that repsonse. "You could've at least lied to me
    and said i was important..."

    "I could've, but that would make me a liar young man, now eat up, you crowding my house up!"

    He looks at the soup and shrugs before returning to chowing down on it...

    Jecht continues to chomp down on the old womens good food. The women opens her mouth to speak. "Young man, you know your a pig right"

    In a muttered tone Jecht replies with "Yeah yeah i know, but this food is really good...whats in it?"

    "You really dont wanna know" replies the shrill old women

    Jecht looks down at the soup and eyes it carefully. "Whatever it tastes good better than nothing"

    He finished the soup and stands up. "Ill be getting out of here see ya women" states Jecht.

    "Fine, i'll be seeing your sorry ass again"
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by judai12 on Tue Aug 19 2008, 00:50

    WOW! your good des i love it
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 01:13

    its not much
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by judai12 on Tue Aug 19 2008, 01:34

    yeah its really good
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 19:35

    Previously:He finished the soup and stands up. "Ill be getting out of here see ya women" states Jecht.

    "Fine, i'll be seeing your sorry ass again"

    -

    Jecht walks out the house and stretches his body and looks around with one eye open. "Feels good to stretch these guns again". He lowers his arms and relaxes his muslces and opens both eyes, takes a look around and sees nothing but a baron area with some jagged rocks a long ways out. "I wonder how long I was out for?"

    He decided to leave that question be and high tail it out of there before the women comes out and nags him again. Jecht takes a step forward and he hears a crack, he thinks its just something he stepped on so he continues to walk.

    Another crack was heard and he looked down, he was cracking the floor with his feet! "Wow, i'm that strong ge some!" He takes another step and falls through the ground...

    Jecht looks down and notices nothing below, he thinks back to his childhood, was it well worth it, the same question going through his mind....Jecht closes his eyes and awaits...
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by theBOSS. on Tue Aug 19 2008, 21:44

    Make 'em longer, pl0x?
    Even though I apologize in advance for sounding like a ocd biatch, do you need a beta? o_o
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:13

    as much as i would love to respond to tht death, this was just something i was doing to see if pl liked it...i have been planning to write a full featured fanfic like yours...it inspired me it was good...beta?
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:24

    BEWAREE!!
    watch teh spelling <3
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:26

    i will try lol...only 2 installments left
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:27

    You should use Word with spell check before you post it :3
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:29

    maybe...i typed this all from the quick reply box
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:30

    Yar.
    Or maybe just read over it well before posting.
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:33

    maybe if i said it wasnt crap
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:35

    T__T Its not crap.
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:36

    from what i can really do it is
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    Re: A Lonely Quest

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Aug 19 2008, 22:40

    It's fine. ^^

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