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    PeinQAkatsuki
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    The Truth

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Sun Jul 27 2008, 23:53

    Listen to yourself speak
    Words that I couldn't hear you squeak
    Before, but now they seem to come easily,
    However, I don't care, I wave them by breezily,
    Those words aren't important to me, I won't return
    The same to you, my friend, and your stomach will churn.
    And so what if I am a heart breaker? I kill those who come too close.
    It's not my fault, and if they don't die, they go into comatose.
    Honestly, I don't want them to die, maybe I'm cursed.
    Maybe I'm bad luck, and you won't be the first
    I'm afraid, I don't want to get too near to you,
    For fear of killing, and blood spilling, and turning blue
    From asphyxiation, you and I need our individual space.
    But let me ask you: When you're staring death in the face,
    And you're life flashes before your eyes,
    Will you see my face and smile,
    Or look away in utter disgrace?
    Will you remember me as nothing but someone distant,
    That you knew, you loved, you forgot, you listened
    To what I said about myself, and you believed it,
    Or will you remember me as the one who wouldn't take it,
    And the one who you loved, and wouldn't give up on,
    And even though I killed you unintenionally, you still looked upon
    A star, and got your wish before you died, will it matter?
    Or will my life be nothing to you, and my heart yours to shatter?
    And when you learn to carry on and forget about me,
    Will you decide to turn around and try to see
    What's left of my wounded soul, and try and heal it,
    Or will you watch it crumble and see every last bit?
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    Re: The Truth

    Post by quater on Sun Jul 27 2008, 23:53

    I didn't read it.

    But sweet you made it rhyme!
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    Re: The Truth

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Mon Jul 28 2008, 00:05

    Hey cool, I got a compliment ^.^ The rhythem is off though. This probably couldn't be a song until I revised it a bit.
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    Re: The Truth

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 28 2008, 00:52

    very dark, i like it pein.

    is it a poem or song..it kinda sounds like both.
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    Re: The Truth

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Mon Jul 28 2008, 14:01

    Kinda a bit of both. The rhythem gets kinda off though towards the end, so I'll need to revise it before I can make it a song.

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