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    A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 19:08

    my first time trying this.

    The Sea

    The sea drifts along the shore
    forever embedding and wrapping around the Earth's core
    tides swift and furious
    oh they can be oh so glorious

    Like the never ending tommorow
    they can bring back my pains of sorrow
    as I strive through the motions
    I sit along the shore and listen to the ocean

    You the "sea" can be full of hate
    and you can also choose my fate
    You are mysterious and filled with words
    that can sing like endless chords
    Your filled with the light of hope
    and I know I can survive as long as I cope.
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 19:11

    cris that one was very good
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by Cutieyboo on Sat Jul 19 2008, 19:33

    that is a very good poem.
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by Aichu on Sat Jul 19 2008, 20:24

    ...no chatspeak? o.o Call the television network! *brick'd*

    I love the imagery you use to describe the sea.
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 20:26

    thanks aichu
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Sat Jul 19 2008, 21:14

    very nice, cris Oh Yeah! nice imagery
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by Claud-kun on Sat Jul 19 2008, 21:20

    I really like this one. Good job Cris!
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by GL on Sun Jul 20 2008, 10:55

    i love it! :3
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Jul 20 2008, 11:00

    thanks
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by neon kun on Sun Jul 20 2008, 11:47

    it's very good. ^^
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Jul 31 2008, 14:02

    That was good Cris!
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 31 2008, 14:06

    thanks pein, my first time trying a rhyme poem
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Jul 31 2008, 14:07

    Rhyming poems are hard. Especially when you have to rhyme obscure words that seem to have nothing that rhyme with them.
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 31 2008, 14:08

    yeah thats true
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Jul 31 2008, 14:11

    I tried to rhyme psychic one time... it took me forever to figure out a way to do so.
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Fri Aug 22 2008, 20:55

    that was awesome.
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 22 2008, 21:09

    thanks tsuki
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Aug 23 2008, 03:46

    :D So pretty! I love rhymes.

    <3 Nice!
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 23 2008, 03:52

    thanks NF^^
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by Dancing Mist on Sat Aug 23 2008, 12:29

    Happy Aww i likes it!
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 23 2008, 12:34

    thank u DM^^
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by Dancing Mist on Sat Aug 23 2008, 12:38

    Welcome
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by InnerCherry on Sat Aug 23 2008, 13:13

    Wow. That was awesome!!
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 23 2008, 13:16

    thank you cherry
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    Re: A Rhyming poem

    Post by InnerCherry on Sat Aug 23 2008, 13:18

    Wow. That was awesome!!

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