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    Cris's 7th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 16:29

    Pain

    This pain it comes in many forms to attack the heart and mind of humans
    It pulsates with a deep throbbing, like a needle from a shot and all you want is to resist the fumes...Why does "pain" seek to mess with the lives of people?

    Can't "pain" just disappear and disinegrate away...
    Like acid...why do you keep haunting my torchered soul...can't you tell...that I've had enough of you!..All you do "pain" is stain me...having me feel regret because of you, causing my heart to feel the brunt force of it all....

    As I go through this thing called "pain"...I begin to grow stronger...and gradually my heart begins to toughen and become stronger in each step...but at the same time "pain"...you are wreckless and try to break my spirit...

    Somtimes dealing with "pain"...you are not easy...its not hard to forgive...but hard to forget...one thing I do learn from "pain" is you can grow stronger...and it can also teach you lessons...but in the hardest of ways..

    "Pain" you have walked through my path of life and you will continue to linger around me...
    But i will become a better person all because.... of you "pain" you teach me my mistakes...and give me a chance for me to not do that again...without "pain" in life...
    How do you hope be a stronger person?
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Sat Jul 19 2008, 16:44

    one of your best ones here, cris ^^
    very deep
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Jul 19 2008, 16:54

    Ahh nice one Cris.

    Weird becos my friend just read me one of her poems labeled "Pain" just a few seconds sgo O_o

    I really liked this though cos it's true ^^ Pain teaches you alot. Good job Mrs. Poet ^_^
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 17:48

    thanks saba & NF. lol thats funny and weird NF.
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Jul 19 2008, 17:49

    oo great poem crispin
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 17:49

    thanks james
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Jul 19 2008, 17:50

    ^^ ur welcome
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by AtaruSabrMaster on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:00

    awesome poem cris ^_^

    totally true
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:01

    thanks ataru^^
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by knssquad on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:13

    -thumbs up-

    Oh Yeah!
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:14

    hey knss would u like to join my team of helpers who help ppl with their jutsus and their RPG characters stats r involed
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:25

    one of the best ones cris.i love it. sooo good
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:28

    thank u judai^^
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:37

    *hugs* your welcome. i hate my life
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:38

    y u hate ur life judai
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:39

    just because
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:44

    hi i am dumb. :P
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:46

    no ur not little
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:48

    no he really is
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by seshimazi on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:48

    Cri u r very good at writing Poems!
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:49

    thank u seshi.^^

    plz stop spamming in my topic.
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:50

    hey seshimazi
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:50

    srry crispin i didnt noticed pm me seshi
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jul 19 2008, 18:54

    ok sorry cris .everyone meet at the bar
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    Re: Cris's 7th poem

    Post by Claud-kun on Sat Jul 19 2008, 21:04

    Nice poem Cris. Keep up the good work ^_^

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