Katanna's Poem (Samurai)

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    Katanna's Poem (Samurai)

    Post by KatannaSan on Mon Jul 14 2008, 20:40

    May not be my best work but.... Enjoy...

    Samurai

    Samurais…
    Ponds of war.
    Their place at the Emperor’s side.
    The battlefield.
    Their fate entrusted in the blades of their sword.
    To slay the beast of battle, they become monsters.

    Each move precise.
    Each move planed thoroughly, completely thought out.
    As each quiver passes through their hand,
    As they strike with their sword,
    They decipher.
    Plan.
    Pray.

    “I die by my sword,
    Or my own hands.”

    Strong by their will.
    Their will to prosper.
    Their will to defend.
    Defend what they love.
    For what they care for.

    Their families.
    Peace...
    Their traditions and culture.
    Freedom...

    Protected by their loved one’s prayers,
    They fought with diligence...

    The battle is over,
    Only one left standing.
    He is victorious,
    The winner of the battle.
    But his men are dead,
    Though hope still remains.

    The diluted blood of his comrades will bloom...

    In spring,
    The sakura trees weep.
    Of the stone warriors,
    Of the loss,
    Of the perfect harmony.
    The perfect moment in time...

    Rate if you would....

    -Katanna


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    Re: Katanna's Poem (Samurai)

    Post by AkiQ on Mon Jul 14 2008, 20:42

    that was good kanna-san.
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    Re: Katanna's Poem (Samurai)

    Post by KatannaSan on Mon Jul 14 2008, 20:45

    Thank you!

    Appreciate it very much!

    ^-^
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    Re: Katanna's Poem (Samurai)

    Post by AkiQ on Mon Jul 14 2008, 20:46

    you're welcome.
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    Re: Katanna's Poem (Samurai)

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Tue Jul 15 2008, 01:52

    You spelled awesome wrong but anyway, it was great! I liked it :D

    "To slay the beast of battle, they become monsters"

    I liked that part. I wish I could write poems like that >_> Very good Katanna.
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    Re: Katanna's Poem (Samurai)

    Post by KatannaSan on Tue Jul 15 2008, 14:03

    NejiFan wrote:You spelled awesome wrong but anyway, it was great! I liked it :D

    "To slay the beast of battle, they become monsters"

    I liked that part. I wish I could write poems like that >_> Very good Katanna.

    LMAO

    It's MY way of spelling it!

    (>.>)

    Thank you! Much appreciated!

    ^-^

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