Crispin's 6th poem

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    Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Jul 08 2008, 22:41

    Drift of Hope

    The high washing, thunder of waves...clash beating on the heart of the earths...precious skin...Zolek...looks for a sign of...some sort of hope....drifting like that of sheet of wind..across the wild grasslands of lucious plain....he calls like that of a deer looking for its dear mother....the eyes..drifting..and looking...just for a sliver of any one...to recognize...

    Alone..on the land...similiar to that of acorn being dropped....he longs..to find the roots...a place to call his own...walking through the desolent cities...full of smog...that poisons...like that of a sting ray..."where do I belong".....people looking at him...like a black sheep of population...they cast him out...to the most defiling and deserted part of town...

    "Hope, this is the only thing...I can cling to like a blanket"....Zolek...soon finds...a a stray dog being casted out...just as himself...Zolek begins to care for this animal...since it has no where...to belong....Zolek tells stories of his past to this dog...

    As these two mammals..travel the land..searching..hoping...that they would be excepted..some where....in this world...soon one day...the stray dog..falls ill to the clutches of death..wrapping its claws in the dogs body...this young man..Zolek..tries everything in his known..power to save the only friend he's ever had...

    As this animal..is drifting father into the light of heaven...Zolek knows..travels the sea...the dog..licks his hand as a "thank you"...
    the breath..disipates from the dog....Zolek..lights the dog's body on fire..as a proper burial of his people do...respecting this animal..who gave him hope...he spreads the ashes of the dog...praying for a better lifetime in the afterlife...in the sea..."thank you, for noticing someone like me...you and I are one in the same...Goodbye..Hope"

    Zolek spirit drifting away into the sun's warming rays...still searching his distant hope he survived on...
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by AkiQ on Tue Jul 08 2008, 22:47

    Puppy Dog Eyes that was so good cris!
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Tue Jul 08 2008, 22:50

    Puppy Dog Eyes *sniffs* Holy crap, it was awesome and sad D:
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by Hiro on Tue Jul 08 2008, 23:01

    Puppy Dog Eyes Crying oh man....i almost cried...*Sucks it up and wipes his tear*
    Man up boii....
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Tue Jul 08 2008, 23:04

    Zolek's dog dies...

    That's tragic and sad
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by Banouin on Tue Jul 08 2008, 23:05

    gj
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by Temari on Tue Jul 08 2008, 23:16

    good job cris.
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by knssquad on Tue Jul 08 2008, 23:17

    Wahh
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by jake989 on Tue Jul 08 2008, 23:28

    Very tragic, but very good!
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by neon kun on Wed Jul 09 2008, 05:27

    very nice, though sad. but nice. ^^
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by theBOSS. on Wed Jul 09 2008, 10:44

    cris, you sound like a pessimist :D
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 09 2008, 12:41

    lol thanks death
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by GL on Wed Jul 09 2008, 14:54

    Love i love it, so sad!! <'33
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by Akia on Wed Jul 09 2008, 19:01

    "Awwww...
    The dog was dead when it was burned, right?"
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 09 2008, 20:41

    yup it was akia
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by MissQoolKat on Wed Jul 09 2008, 21:15

    ...Nuuu!!! The doggy died!!! D:

    -sniffs- So sad but soo good...
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 10 2008, 12:05

    thanks kat^^
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by judai12 on Thu Jul 10 2008, 14:50

    cris that was one of the best i have red^^
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 10 2008, 15:34

    thank ya judai
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by judai12 on Thu Jul 10 2008, 15:40

    ^^ u r welcome
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by Choushi on Thu Jul 10 2008, 16:05

    coolio.....
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Thu Jul 10 2008, 19:15

    pretty awesome, crisp ^^
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by judai12 on Thu Jul 10 2008, 19:19

    no it was awesome
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 10 2008, 22:13

    thanks choushi & saba^_^
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    Re: Crispin's 6th poem

    Post by judai12 on Thu Jul 10 2008, 23:40

    Happy

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