Crispin's 5th poem

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    Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 13:11

    Lost Blood

    Hey you, the person who flows through my veins like the never ending Nile River...you come to my mind at certain times in my life time...I get asked about you...like the never ending questions of life....you who are my long lost blood...will I ever be able see the appearance of you...a spirit who resides in me....i long to know u...

    Almost 17 years have past...since you've seen me....my chances of survival a mere....46 percent of living and premature by 23 weeks.....you find me someone....who has a better knowledge...to take me...as you entrust all ur hope in them....for someone else who could help bring me back to great health....

    I live..to this day..as thriving...and with no health problems..of any kind....if i could just...meet you again.....I would just say "thank you, mother".....it takes a strong mother to give up their younging for a better chance of surviving and living life to the fullest....my lost blood..I wonder about you...and our bloodline family....but at the moment right now...all I can say is..."thank you, mother my lost blood".
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by judai12 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 13:50

    WOW! I love the new poem
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 13:56

    thanks judai
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by AkiQ on Mon Jul 07 2008, 14:05

    this is mt favorite poem of yours!
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 14:09

    thanks aki
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by Claud-kun on Mon Jul 07 2008, 14:17

    It was pretty nice Cris. Good work ^_^
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by AkiQ on Mon Jul 07 2008, 14:19

    your welcome cri. ^^
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Mon Jul 07 2008, 14:22

    Ahhhh.
    -bows-
    I have to admit, I like this one better then your others :D Good Job!
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 14:27

    thanks NF
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by amaterasu on Mon Jul 07 2008, 14:34

    it was good
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Mon Jul 07 2008, 15:28

    Oh wow...That was beautiful...VERY good.
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 15:31

    thanks Charm
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by jake989 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 15:37

    Beautiful.
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 15:38

    thank u jakey.
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Mon Jul 07 2008, 15:38

    Welcome Onee-san!
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Mon Jul 07 2008, 16:21

    This is probably my favorite, too.

    Lost Blood..
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by Aichu on Mon Jul 07 2008, 16:35

    This is probably my favorite of the two I've read so far (though I shall still continue to nag you about chatspeak, bwahaha! 'you' and 'your', please and thank you C:). Is this based on events in your life, crispy?
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 16:47

    lol i guess i won't give up on that chatspeak^^
    *nods*yeah it is aichu.
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by Aichu on Mon Jul 07 2008, 17:13

    Ah, that's cool. I had a feeling it was...the poem felt very personal.
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by Hiiatte on Mon Jul 07 2008, 17:57

    mommy.... Despair Wahh NOOO!
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Jul 07 2008, 21:08

    holy damn.
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by judai12 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 22:18

    she got u guys*lol gets some cake*
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jul 07 2008, 22:33

    thanks judai LOL
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by neon kun on Mon Jul 07 2008, 22:41

    awesome. ^^ it's directed to your mother? very nice meaning. :D i like it a lot.
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    Re: Crispin's 5th poem

    Post by Akia on Tue Jul 08 2008, 02:16

    It's great (4th is still my fav though!!!) is it seriously directed at your mom?

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