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    Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 17:03

    Souls

    My lovely dove....you bring the flight of love...to the breath and spirit of
    this sparrow....enveloping in the glow of your spiritual self.....nothing can be ever happier...than saying these words..."i love you".....they are forever entertwined into the deepest confines of my heart and soul...our hands intertwined in a deep beyond any....we call..for each other....like long lost love....for we can...never be solemnly free without one another....now...spread your wings...and fly with me into the hope of a new tommorow..in the skies.
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by panthachild on Wed Jul 02 2008, 18:09

    ooo00o0o
    i like this
    its so sweet
    you should write more
    Oh Yeah!
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 18:46

    thanks i have others^^
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by judai12 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:19

    can i make one?
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:22

    yeah u can make ur own poem.

    just click on new topic.
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by AkiQ on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:31

    good job cri Oh Yeah!
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:34

    thanks..its not as good as the others...though.
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by judai12 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:36

    No all of your poems r the best^^
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:40

    True, all your poems are awesome ;D
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by judai12 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:41

    see i'm right:p
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 02 2008, 23:49

    XP..nah this i just sent cuz i felt like writing some poetry.

    its not all that great... -_-
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by judai12 on Thu Jul 03 2008, 00:11

    ok
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Jul 03 2008, 02:05

    Wow Onee-sama. That was beautiful.
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 03 2008, 02:08

    thanks charm
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by Sado on Thu Jul 03 2008, 02:12

    I think I'd appreciate the metaphor of doves and sparrows more if you didn't use it in three separate poems. After reading all three it begins to run thin and it seems like you're just recycling the same thing and changing up the length...

    Just a quick thought.
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 03 2008, 14:45

    its harsh....but i see what you mean.*nods*
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by judai12 on Fri Jul 04 2008, 14:25

    ya sado why do u have to be sooo mean
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by Sado on Fri Jul 04 2008, 16:25

    ...Just curious Judai but is any criticism, regardless of how warranted it may be, mean?

    Because if so then I'm "mean" because I'm trying to help out by saying where people could improve.

    In reality though, being mean would require that I have malicious intent with which I intend to do mental, physical, or emotional harm to a person. And as I have no real desire to harm anybody here in any manner I wouldn't call that being mean.
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by KatannaSan on Sat Jul 05 2008, 00:35

    Verry deep. I give you a good concent!

    ^-^
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 05 2008, 01:40

    thank u katanna
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by KatannaSan on Sat Jul 05 2008, 01:43

    Any time!
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 05 2008, 01:45

    have u read my other poems?
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by KatannaSan on Sat Jul 05 2008, 01:50

    No, I cannot say that I have... (Or cannot recall....)
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 05 2008, 01:52

    check em out anytime^_^
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    Re: Crispin's just a lil poem

    Post by KatannaSan on Sat Jul 05 2008, 01:54

    I'd love to, but I'd have to check later on int the week, my net time is running out and I still have a long list of things I want to get through...

    Nice chatting with you!

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