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    Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:18

    Separation


    Separation enter my heart thru the deep spaces of my mind...
    Lurking like a spirit of unknown to any one...it digs its deep claws into my soul...forever embedding its poison in me.

    In the confines of my heart shine the light of a special bond...battling this curse named "Separation"....my heart calling out for the suffering to stop..beating with each seep of separation...gaining way into the door of my heart...a shining light stands up with courage and an everlasting love against this curse....sending the unholy curse name "Separation" to the pure hope & light in which keeps my heart thriving thru the motion of time.

    The evil named "Separation" plotting and planning its evil deeds to forever plunder all my hope into nothing more but a void of complete desolence.
    "Separation" what will you do then, when the confines of my heart shine brighter than your claws can reach?...."Separation" you are nothing more and will remain that for eternity.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by Koneko_Bozu8 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:30

    so deep...-snaps- :D
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:32

    Whoaaaaaaaaa, that. was. very. nice.
    I told you, you should be a poet. ^_^
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:33

    thanks Neji-imouto & Kone-imouto.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:43

    i agree with nefa nad kone Happy

    i love it.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:46

    *smiles*thanks sori^^
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:50

    oh, the similies! the personifications!
    very nice!

    pretty good!
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:53

    thank you saba^___^
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by knssquad on Mon Jun 30 2008, 19:59

    deep Puppy Dog Eyes
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 20:00

    *smiles* thanks kns-imouto.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Jun 30 2008, 20:09

    >.>;

    Too deep for bloodly's poor mind to understand
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 20:11

    XD *smiles* thanks bloodly.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by D-Dei on Mon Jun 30 2008, 20:33

    my gawd.. nice poem, Jazzy nee.. ^_^
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 20:35

    ^___^thanks imouto^__^
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by MissQoolKat on Mon Jun 30 2008, 20:40

    OMG. Awesome poem! I love it! Great job! :D
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 20:41

    thank u kat!^___^
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Jun 30 2008, 21:32

    dang..
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 21:37

    tis that a good "dang" or bad?
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Jun 30 2008, 21:41

    a good one.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Mon Jun 30 2008, 21:43

    I love it! You should be a poet like NF said.

    Seperation...Deep
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Jun 30 2008, 21:45

    Crispin has inspired me
    thank you.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 21:46

    ^__^thanks death^__^


    Thank you titan, i just spoke using my heart.
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by Choushi on Mon Jun 30 2008, 22:19

    coolness
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Jun 30 2008, 22:21

    thanks choushi^^
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    Re: Crispin's poem

    Post by neon kun on Mon Jun 30 2008, 22:46

    wow, deep. ^^ very nice, cris. :D Oh Yeah!

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