Dark's FanFiction #3

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    Dark's FanFiction #3

    Post by XxXDark.FlashXxX on Thu May 08 2008, 20:32

    Hello all the people that may or may not read meh stuff! This is part three and I feel proud...ish...yeah. ^^'

    Fast Forward to the next day, Training!! W00t! They get their first excersise (sp?)as a team!! Yeah...I'm...idk...w00ty today...

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    "My Dear...Why not come visit me?"the voice rung.

    "Where are you?"Dark whispered, not being able to muster anything stronger.

    "You remember where...I'll lead you if you can't think about it..."he said. Dark felt this dream slipping away. The pain that stung her neck jolted her out of unconsiousness. She turned on the bed, looking at her clock.

    "Four AM..."she whispered irritably, drawing herself up. "Why does he speak to me?"she wondered quietly. The yellow-eyed girl rose from the bed, walking through the halls to go outside. She was out there soon enough, she could feel the throb of her right eye sockett. "Uhh..."she grumbled,holding her empty sockett.

    "Does is hurt?"the words came with the comming wind. Dark gasped, whipping around to see him.

    "Why've you come back?" she almost snarled at him, he smiled deviously.

    "Only to see how your skills are progressing...I'm debating when you're comming with me...Does your eye still hurt?"he smirked, his yellow eyes amused with Dark's pain.

    "And if it does?"she growled, then inhaled sharply. She dropped to her knees, both shoulder and eye sockett burning. "Stop!"she cried,the pain burned hotter. Orochimaru simply grinned.

    "I'll visit you again..."he said,vanishing in the wind. Dark punched the ground after a moment.

    "No!!"

    (I haven't looked it over,if it's long, then it's done, if not. I'll finish it soon enough.)
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    Re: Dark's FanFiction #3

    Post by Sado on Thu May 08 2008, 21:52

    Perhaps you should consider putting all your things into a single thread.
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    Re: Dark's FanFiction #3

    Post by Choushi on Fri May 09 2008, 00:50

    i agree....easier for people....cuz their lazy...trust me...i know...from experience
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    Re: Dark's FanFiction #3

    Post by XxXDark.FlashXxX on Fri May 09 2008, 19:33

    Meh...I don't have the attention span to write the entire thing out on one thread. And I guess I didn't make it to where I said it would be skipped to. ^^'

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