The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

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    The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Choushi on Sat Apr 19 2008, 14:31

    hey everybody!!!
    i kno that most of u dont
    kno me...but yea, im choushi...one of the original writers of the
    sand...i've had ups, downs, and spirals that go both up and down. and i
    feel like i have met some great people on this site...and i cant wait
    to come back...
    so to the point...
    im leaving, temporarily, im
    really busy with school, sports, family, church...and its really hard
    to find internet time now...so imma have to take a break for about a
    month or so...but to leave you guys...i'll leave you with my last
    chapter...

    *as choushi sat in his desk...looking for words to leave his great friends with a dark shadow slowly creeps into the room*
    choushi:
    so, is it my time to go?
    *the dark shadow, suprised at the fact he was detected so easily, hesitated*
    shadow:
    wh-w-what do u mean?
    choushi:
    *stands up* i knew it would come sometime...my death...i am ready to die...but just give me this last wish...one last fight...
    shadow:
    as you wish....old friend...
    choushi:
    *gets into his fighting stance, cracking his neck both ways*
    havent done this in a while...dont have mercy on me
    shadow:
    i wouldnt've done it any other way
    *gets into his fighting stance, with his eyes glowing red*

    *flashback*

    *choushi is in a black tux...at the alter...exitedly wating for the love of his life*
    choushi:
    oh, *straightens out his suit, fixes his tie*...i hope i look good
    *the organ starts playing a beautiful melody*
    choushi:
    she looks so beautiful
    *the
    most beautiful woman in the world slowly walks down the aisle...perfect
    in every way...from head to toe she is an angel...as she reaches the
    alter...the preist reads aloud all the blessings, customary for a
    wedding...this is choushi's wedding day...the happiest day of his
    life...*
    priest:
    i now pronounce you husband and wife, you may now kiss the bride
    *choushi
    lifts the veil revealing his new wife...crispin...he embraces her with
    a kiss and as they walk down the aisle choushi looks at his best man,
    whos eyes were glowing red

    *end of flashback*

    *just snaps out of it as he sees the same glowing eyes staring at him, with a killing intent*
    *choushi activates a seal on his chest his aori kane revealing themselves as the smoke cleared*
    choushi:
    this'll be a fight to remember...
    shadow:
    *also activates a seal, revealing his glowing sword*

    *the fight lasts for days until choushi, out of exhaustion takes a knee*
    choushi:
    it is time...do it
    shadow:
    ok
    *takes
    his sword and runs it through choushis body...and on contact choushi
    burns into ashes....

    *the shadow walks foward and reveals himself with a pheonix mask *
    ren:
    goodbye old friend
    *as ren picks up choushi's ashes...he seals them into a container....soon to be ressurected some other time...when he is needed*

    ps...i found a lil time in my schedule to put this out in public...i only get like 10 mins at most....so i hope yall liked it....this was like a 5 min story....
    GOD bless...


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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by amaterasu on Sun Apr 20 2008, 21:01

    oh, nice

    good by for awhile then Choushi
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Apr 22 2008, 00:51

    *claps*rly amazingly sweet choushi and a good end to ur character.*smiles*
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Apr 22 2008, 01:14

    who here does not know that it was supposed to be me that killed him...
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by soulja boy on Tue Apr 22 2008, 11:04

    i didnt.......why did u kill him??
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Apr 22 2008, 20:13

    i didn't choose it...he wrote it...i am the only main Phoenix user on here...but she called it sweet...
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Apr 22 2008, 23:19

    the flashback waz sweet, not u killing him. That waz a suprise to me.
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Choushi on Fri Apr 25 2008, 00:11

    i found sum actual time to write stuff....this is great....but once i get back to full time....i'll explain my death
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Apr 25 2008, 00:20

    ok cool^^
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Destinykil on Fri Apr 25 2008, 14:08

    tht was awesome...good bye for now friend
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Endless Nothing on Fri Apr 25 2008, 15:53

    I believe he chose to fall by Renden's hand because of Ren's powers of the phoenix. Which means his resurection would only be possible through those same powers.

    Nice story, we will await your return.
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Choushi on Fri May 09 2008, 19:54

    hmmmm....i think imma do a follow up...i'm just using this as an excuse not to write anymore


    but i'll try nd put a follow up soon
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri May 09 2008, 20:01

    all right thats fine^^ u got great talent babe.^^
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by Choushi on Mon May 12 2008, 20:10

    thanx.....i liked this story.....did u ?
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    Re: The end of choushi....[i found a lil time in my schedule]

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon May 12 2008, 20:14

    yes it waz great, very good storyline.^^

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