Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

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    Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri Apr 18 2008, 20:29

    ppft, everyone's doing poetry.
    and so i shall show you guys how i can totally mess up poetry admirers.
    i hope your eyes burn.

    -
    Perceive

    If you can see what I can see,
    maybe you'll see happiness.
    If you can see what I can see,
    maybe you'd be breathless.

    But if you can see what I can see,
    can you live with this lifelong burden?
    If you can see what I can see,
    can you handle the truth forbidden?

    Please try to see what I can see,
    even if it may make you leave.
    Another day is drawing near,
    just try, try and perceive.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by Meika-Chan on Fri Apr 18 2008, 20:33

    Bah, you need more confiednce!

    It's a really good poem X3
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by Banouin on Fri Apr 18 2008, 20:34

    Wow death and poetry never seen that coming!! ^_^
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri Apr 18 2008, 20:35

    bah.

    i had to write that for that stupid pocket poem crap.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by darkbutterfly15 on Fri Apr 18 2008, 21:56

    that was really good! i thought it was a lot better than all of those mushy love poems everywhere.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Wed May 14 2008, 18:28

    Envy My Pain Evil Glare


    Hate me, break me,
    try to take me down.
    Rumors, categorizations, bullying-
    go ahead, I won't make a sound.

    Call me a masochist?
    I'll just laugh in your face.
    Kick me down all you want,
    you're the one that's the disgrace.

    Sure, sometimes I break and ask why-
    why it has to be me, why these scars remain.
    But in the end, I'll realize,
    that you, you envy my pain.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by tentay18 on Sat May 24 2008, 18:14

    well i love poetry:love:
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by quater on Sat May 24 2008, 19:03

    I don't envy pain.

    Mih...Poetry...

    For the world my eyes did catch fire.

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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Mon May 26 2008, 15:14

    death-chan wrote:Envy My Pain Evil Glare


    Hate me, break me,
    try to take me down.
    Rumors, categorizations, bullying-
    go ahead, I won't make a sound.

    Call me a masochist?
    I'll just laugh in your face.
    Kick me down all you want,
    you're the one that's the disgrace.

    Sure, sometimes I break and ask why-
    why it has to be me, why these scars remain.
    But in the end, I'll realize,
    that you, you envy my pain.
    Nice. I like this one alot.Puppy Dog Eyes
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by jake989 on Fri May 30 2008, 15:03

    I like them both!
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri May 30 2008, 15:45

    ...

    Well, it's just a dream.

    Oh crap.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by jake989 on Fri May 30 2008, 15:49

    Hmm?
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri May 30 2008, 16:05

    ...go write a poem
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by jake989 on Fri May 30 2008, 16:44

    Really?
    You want me too?
    I will then!
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri May 30 2008, 16:57

    Cool beans.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by quater on Fri May 30 2008, 18:26

    Poetry is so easy. But I guess this is good work there Death. Not sure, I am not sure what constitutes a good poem.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri May 30 2008, 18:40

    Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by quater on Fri May 30 2008, 18:47

    Then you are probably a really good poet. All the best are humble.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri May 30 2008, 20:37

    quater wrote:For the world my eyes did catch fire.

    that's poetry too
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by Banouin on Fri May 30 2008, 21:54

    death-chan wrote:Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.

    Same..I cant write it good at all Crying
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri May 30 2008, 21:55

    Banouin wrote:
    death-chan wrote:Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.

    Same..I cant write it good at all Crying
    You mean well... >.>

    And I read your poems. They're good.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by Banouin on Fri May 30 2008, 21:57

    death-chan wrote:
    Banouin wrote:
    death-chan wrote:Can't write poetry for my life, that's what I told my English teacher.

    Same..I cant write it good at all Crying
    You mean well... >.>

    And I read your poems. They're good.

    haha should have seen that "Well" thing coming, and no Mine all suck XD
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by quater on Fri May 30 2008, 22:02

    death-chan wrote:
    quater wrote:For the world my eyes did catch fire.

    that's poetry too

    Flame eyes are not poetry
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Fri May 30 2008, 22:04

    Yeah, okay Bano. I'm going to shove a tomato in your face.

    And... Kazekage... you never know ._.
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    Re: Boo, poetry! [[121408]]

    Post by Banouin on Fri May 30 2008, 22:06

    death-chan wrote:Yeah, okay Bano. I'm going to shove a tomato in your face.

    And... Kazekage... you never know ._.

    Tomato! Puppy Dog Eyes

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