Dektek's Poetry ^_^

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    Dektek's Poetry ^_^

    Post by Destinykil on Thu Apr 17 2008, 18:51

    I see your face as i walk on by
    knowing ill never have you as i give a sigh
    what you need is a compasionate man
    to love and fulfill your every demand
    look at me as i tell you this
    not even death can compare to your kiss
    gazing in amazement from across the room
    not having you can cause instant doom
    taking care of you is worth the while
    because for you i would walk 1000 miles
    the blunt fact is i love you
    and everyone reading this poem knows it's true
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    I see you stepping left to right
    your beautiful eyes elude my sight
    gliding gently across my soul
    you gracefull looks make me whole
    your serene voice is so dear
    i wish it was my own to hear
    coming closer my own virtue calls
    lookin at you my heart bounces off walls
    the feeling of us together keeps me hot
    like any other girl can not
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    kudos to you,you have my heart
    staying safe so we never part
    days go by from minutes to hours
    lookie here i brought you flowers ;)
    when you cry i'll cry too
    just remember i'm here next to you
    feeling great even in pain
    just seeing your face keeps me sane
    i keep you in mind even when i sleep
    this poem to you is very deep

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    all these days we talked i've been thinking, i've wonered how i met someone so amazing!

    your looks are second to none, your personality shines bright like the sun


    my mind is in a state of grace, your presence sweeps me off into space

    your view on life is eternally whole, the slightest touch raises my soul!

    you make me wish i was a better person t heart, if we come together i'll do anything so we never part!

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    ok i kno there are horrible...but w/e
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    Re: Dektek's Poetry ^_^

    Post by Temari on Thu Apr 17 2008, 18:54

    I thought it was great.
    I like it.
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    Post by Destinykil on Thu Apr 17 2008, 18:54

    thankz....one of them got published...cant remember though
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    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Apr 19 2008, 14:47

    Puppy Dog Eyes Puppy Dog Eyes
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    Post by Destinykil on Mon Apr 21 2008, 11:20

    thank you
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    Post by Sado on Tue Apr 22 2008, 03:43

    Destinykil wrote:thankz....one of them got published...cant remember though

    Where'd it get published to eh?
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    Post by Destinykil on Fri Apr 25 2008, 14:10

    want the link....poetry.com....sent me thje emails..and the book is called ...damn ...ill get it to ya sado
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    Post by Sado on Fri Apr 25 2008, 15:59

    Don't bother. I hate to tell you this bud, but poetry.com is a scam. They'll "publish" anything, if it were real then I'd have had 5-10 poems "published" by now.
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    Re: Dektek's Poetry ^_^

    Post by Destinykil on Wed Apr 30 2008, 15:28

    lol...i figured so....chyeah...i never sent anything into them

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