WOTN CHRONICLES CHAPTER 4 !!!!!!! REDONE AS OF 3/14/08!!

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    WOTN CHRONICLES CHAPTER 4 !!!!!!! REDONE AS OF 3/14/08!!

    Post by Choushi on Sun Mar 09 2008, 10:58

    *as both Q and Jose look at the note their life
    and joy slowly drains and the shinobi in the background get quiet as
    they read the next words*
    Q/Jose:
    Cannot help you...For i am deathly sick..i am sorry...
    Q:
    all hope is lost...it...its over
    Jose:
    WAIT!!!
    Q:
    there is one more person that i can get a hold of
    Jose:
    Q
    Q:
    Jose
    *as
    both men realize this they both send messanger falcons deciding to meet
    in a remote place...a forgotten place...the whirlpool village in 1
    month*
    *end of flashback*

    Jose:
    *pulls out a sand arrow*
    i have my part...so...hows the peaceful life
    Q:
    wonderful....i feel so good now...ever since the incident...our lives have since then been intertwined..
    Jose:
    you can say that again...lets eat

    *flashback*
    *surrounded by whirlpools Jose, Q, and both their armies make peace with each other*

    Jose:
    i have something for you*brings out helmet* Defense...my specialty may you always be safe with this

    Q:
    wow
    *recieves helmet* well i have a little something too * makes a sand
    arrow* attack...hehe...my specialty....blood will definitely be shed
    with this in your arsenal.

    Jose:
    *recieves arrow* thank you
    *shakes hands*

    *Fire and ice, these two men were certainly not enemies anymore...they were....friends....they were brothers in war*
    *both armies left their seperate ways promising that they would be there for each other if needed*

    Q:
    *as they marched back to suna a black arrow grazed the neck of the kazekage* WHAT WAS THAT!?!?!?
    *a
    dark figure came out of the shadows slowly...He was hooded and his
    battle scars streched across his whole body...he was the strongest Jounin in the shadow village...Endless*
    Endless:
    i am here to collect the wants of my lord....the kurokage...
    *renden quickly jumps foward in front of Q*
    Renden:
    WHAT
    DOES YOUR "LORD" WANT!!! CUZ HE SURE AS HELL ISNT GONNA GET IT
    HERE!!!!*glares evilly, summons sword out of the seal written on the
    bandages on his left arm*
    Endless:
    oh really???*slides into an offensive fighting stance*

    *flashback*

    *PF, Dei, and silver are still in their meeting*
    PF:
    what i want...is..the head of the kazekage....the man to bring it to me...will become very wealthy.
    *end of flashback*

    Endless:
    i think he will.*slides down into his shadow, appears behind the Kazekage, about to remove his head from his shoulders*

    Renden:
    GRAVITY SEAL LEVEL 1!!!*disappears, Endless is knocked back just as the blade touches Q's neck*
    Jake:
    I'll help you ren-san...
    Renden:
    NO! you guys go....this *glares at endless in the eye* rookie...is mine
    *the army runs away with just choushi left talking to renden*
    Choushi:
    are you sure you wanna stay here and fight him yourself?? i mean you never know how many people they actually have...
    Renden:
    Dont
    worry friend...i will be fine...and in the slim chance i dont come
    back...i wanna give you this * gives choushi something* distribute it
    to everybody in the makai clan when you get back to suna....
    Choushi:
    alright *gives renden a nod sending him a message that he understands what the object is and what he must do*
    renden:
    now go...the kazekage needs some good fighters with him
    *choushi runs off*
    *in another area there is jose and his army...walking by the oceanside*
    Jose:
    Hey, ama....thank you for always being there for me...you are a true friend
    Ama:
    ye..yea...u are too.*looks away*
    Spyke:
    so...*looks at the whirlpools in the ocean*...those look preeety vicious
    Ama:
    *looks at the whirlpool*
    yes...they do...
    Jose:
    is something wrong ama???
    Ama:
    i am sorry mizukage sama...
    Jose:
    what do you mean??
    *out of nowhere a lightningbolt strikes down in front of ama blinding jose and the rest of the army...*
    Ama:
    *appears behind jose in a hostage position*
    alright!!! EVERYBODY GO!!! TELL THE VILLAGE THE MIZUKAGE IS DEAD!! LEAVE!! *nobody moves* NOW!!! *everybody runs away*
    Jose:
    What are you doing??? What is wrong with you?
    *the
    sky turns grey and bolts of lightning fly and collide with the earth
    and sea with unnatural speed and as every lightning bolt hits another
    solider appears*
    Ama:
    *unseathes his sword lifting it up to the sky*
    *a clash of two swords is heard*
    Renden:
    HOW DO YOU POSSIBLY THINK YOU CAN RETRIVE THE HEAD OF THE KAZEKAGE!!!
    endless:
    hehe *kicks renden away and shadow teleports behind renden kicking him again but as he kicks renden's body turns into flames*
    renden:
    *the REAL renden is standing under endless who is still in the air*
    you're too slow for me *grabs endless's foot and throws him into the tree*
    endless:
    i
    dont need speed when i'm everywhere...*the body that was thrown into
    the tree dissapears...a shadow clone*hehe...you are too naive..
    renden:
    NAIVE???
    endless:
    yes....look
    around you....darkness.... *the storm clouds are rolling in blocking
    the sun* is everywhere...so your speed...haha...cant help you here
    *endless slowly fades into the darkness*
    Renden:
    *alone in the dark nothing but darkness surrounds the lone shinobi*
    (to himself: damn!!! now its almost impossible to kill this guy...FU)
    *renden suddenly gets hit with an immeasurable force sending him flying backwards*
    HEY!!! YOU SNEAKY BASTARD!!! FIGHT ME HEAD ON!!!
    endless:
    but i am in front of you...*rendens head snaps back his blood sent flying*
    Renden:
    i cant hit you but im gonna make sure you dont hit me
    endless:
    are you done yet?? this is getting too easy
    renden:
    *Coughs* what happened *looks down to see his stomach bleeding prefusely as he coughs up blood*
    endless:
    i think i should just kill you now
    Renden:
    HAHAHAHA!!! you think this hurts??? Let me tell you a little about the MAKAI CLAN!!!
    *the tattoo on renden's arm starts glowing once the word makai is uttered, as the midnight blue chakra errupts from his blade and his body Renden glares at the shadow nin*

    to be continued.......


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    Post by amaterasu on Sun Mar 09 2008, 13:49

    haha, nice
    its good
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sun Mar 09 2008, 15:02

    ahah

    Ren-kun shouting! Funny emote XD

    but awsomes Choushi-kun!!!
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    Post by Renden2005 on Mon Mar 10 2008, 00:22

    wtf???you are supposed to let me edit it Choushi...
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    Post by Choushi on Mon Mar 10 2008, 01:02

    i kno i kno...srry renden...i'll send it to u now...will u still edit it buddy???
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    Post by Renden2005 on Mon Mar 10 2008, 01:35

    of coarse...why wouldn't i???
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    Post by Rikku-San on Mon Mar 10 2008, 05:50

    Hey, nice story!!

    Its uber good! ^^
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Mar 11 2008, 09:31

    thanx for the uberness??
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    Post by Yoyo on Wed Mar 12 2008, 15:01

    Haha. I loves it. Still. Can't wait for more awesomeness!!!! Oh Yeah!

    EVIL PF!!!!! Bwahaha Imma kill him. *halo*
    XD
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    Post by Choushi on Fri Mar 14 2008, 04:46

    hahahahaha........


    PS. TO ALL FANS RENDEN AND I JUST EDITED THE STORY!!!!! SO EVERYBODY REREAD THE CHAPTER!!!!
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Mar 15 2008, 14:25

    OMG!!!!

    WAY TO GO CHOUSHI AND REN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Mar 18 2008, 22:15

    nobody wants to read it anymore...... Crying

    oh nd charm whats that list of spouses about???

    i juss saw it...nd i was wonderin
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Mar 18 2008, 22:50

    awesome Choushi & ren!!!!!
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Mar 19 2008, 01:35

    thanx....................
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    Post by Friesenator on Wed Mar 19 2008, 11:16

    I loved this chapter, AND GO MAKAI CLAN, hellz to da yea... Go Renden!!
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    Post by Raimaru on Wed Mar 19 2008, 13:06

    Sooner or later everyone will be in this.
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Mar 19 2008, 22:43

    yup...but people will have to remember me...so imma start writing probably FRIDAY!!!

    so if u wanna b in the next chapter...or future chapters....PM ME TELLING ME A NAME U WANNA GO BY...cuz i cant call people with the username...umm...lightningbolt...

    it just wont work...so plz if u wanna b in it tell me...nd talk to me a little...i need to get a sense of your personality....
    nd if i get it wrong i apologize in advance
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    Post by Yoyo on Thu Mar 20 2008, 15:50

    Dude.... The updates rocks!!!!!!! Bwahaha I love it! X3
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    Post by Endless Nothing on Sat Mar 29 2008, 18:57

    Nice story Ren and Choushi. A battle between myself and Renden is bound to gain you a few fans. I can not wait for the next chapter.
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Mar 29 2008, 20:40

    yup.....u 2 are great fighters....i hope i just catch at least a small essence of both of your powers...
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    Post by Endless Nothing on Sat Mar 29 2008, 20:41

    Im sure you'll do just fine.
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    Post by quater on Sat Mar 29 2008, 21:22

    I love the way that I am always needing protecting here.

    Excellent work choushi.
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    Post by jake989 on Sat Mar 29 2008, 21:43

    Kick ass!
    Nice
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    Post by Choushi on Sun Mar 30 2008, 00:18

    quater wrote:I love the way that I am always needing protecting here.

    Excellent work choushi.

    well i kno u could protect yourself if you wanted to....and dont worry....you'll defend yourself really soon
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    Post by dark_Raptor on Fri Apr 04 2008, 12:58

    pretty shweet

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