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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Mar 10 2008, 20:43

    SPAM IN ME AND HIKAGE'S STORY!

    Bano gets an uber cookie ^_^

    And Endless shall have his request fullfilled.
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Mar 10 2008, 20:47

    spam?
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Banouin on Mon Mar 10 2008, 21:00

    death-chan wrote:SPAM IN ME AND HIKAGE'S STORY!

    Bano gets an uber cookie ^_^

    And Endless shall have his request fullfilled.


    COOKIE!
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Laura-Chan on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:02

    OKAY!!!!!!
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by jake989 on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:03

    Wth...?
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:03

    i think the next chapter should come out.
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by seshimazi on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:03

    i wanna read NEXT CHAPTER!
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Destinykil on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:09

    next chapter please

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    Post by _Crissi_ on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:15

    NEXT CHAPTER NOW !!!!!! ^.^
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Hiiatte on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:49

    next chapter please!

    please write the next!
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Sun Apr 13 2008, 19:52

    oh geez, what's with the pressure.

    chill guys, stop pmsing. i'm writing the next chapter as we speak, thanks to some inspiration from endless...
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by jake989 on Sun Apr 13 2008, 20:03

    Yep, Des PMed all of us, so they all did it
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Sun Apr 13 2008, 20:47

    dotdotdot
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Sun Apr 13 2008, 21:21

    Chapter 7 Up.
    -
    Characters (Old and New):
    Spoiler:

    Shadow:
    Kenji - punkfilter
    Xavier - Endless Nothing
    Mizuki - 2bloodly2love
    Komui - Titaniumxvx

    Sand:
    Hiro - quater
    Hotaru - Sasori-chan
    Kyou - Renden2005
    Ryohei - jake989

    Glacier:
    Hihari - DeI-kUn~
    Haruka - furaiigon
    Katsumi - Kiami
    Yukiko - Angelic Harmony
    Itami - knssquad

    Storm:
    Yukio - SilverLegionaire
    Kazune – Amaterasu
    Mikan – Claud-kun

    Mist:
    Takashi – -J0$3-
    Tsuchi – shinobi's redemption
    Spyke (code name) – spyke543

    Antagonist(s) [For now, they're just going to be called Antagonists]:
    Taiyou Kuroi (Former Shadow Hunternin, participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Akira (Kuroi's partner, participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Ryuujin (A masked man, participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Jin (Participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Keiko (A blind woman, seems to "lead" the five antagonists introduced. A participant in the revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Ken (A wolf-man Type 1 gone wrong. A participant in the revival of Project Tri-Angle)
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    A Dei&Death fanfic.

    -

    VII : complication

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    just another complication in life, just another thing waiting to be sent to endless oblivion.

    -

    “The villagers,” Haruka whispered hurriedly to Hihari.

    “I've got 'em,” Hiro smiled easily but his eyes did not reflect the upward curve of his lips. “Hotaru and Kyou are evacuating Glacier and putting up
    barriers as we speak.”

    “Ah,” Kazune stretched. “Well... I don't feel like fighting right now. May I be
    excused, Yukio-sama?”

    Yukio merely nodded, putting together his chin strap. His rare frown seemed etched onto his face.

    Mikan's sunny expression was gone as well. “Oh, Yukio-sama's getting serious. I'd better go too.”

    Yukio merely dismissed Kazune and Mikan with a single, serious glance.

    Takashi scowled. “How about this: all of you are ordered to evacuate the civilians to safety while we kick this guy's ass off to oblivion.”

    A chuckle from the darkness. “How very cocky. Perhaps that is a side affect to your cowardice – denial and ignorance.”

    Takashi growled angrily and Kenji cast a weary eye over the Mizukage, who was crouched as if he was ready to attack. “Look who's talking. You are
    the one that is 'hiding' in the shadows, you coward.”

    The antagonist let out a low guttural laugh. “I can see why you're the Kurokage, dear boy. But oh no, this? This isn't being a coward. In fact, I am sparing you – I cannot say that I am the prettiest man alive.”

    “Come out and fight, you bastard,” Takashi hissed.

    A small sigh. “You were always so impatient, Takashi.”

    “Don't talk as if you know me!” Takashi snarled.

    “You'd be surprised.”

    And as the figure stepped out from the shadow, Takashi stepped back in recoil.

    -

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    Eye-catch! She seems to fly from tree to tree, sometimes stumbling in her haste. Her short hair whips around her face as her eyes strain against the whoosh of the high speeds she is going at. 'Please... let them be here. Please...'

    -

    -

    Hihari gaped openly at the sight in front of them. 'He... It's... not human...'

    The large figure smirked at the gawking Hikage. “Surprised? I seem to have this effect on almost everyone.”

    Yukio's fist clenched and unclenched.

    “An experiment gone wrong, huh?” Hiro asked lightly, though his eyes reflected disgust.

    The large man-wolf seemed to smile by baring his teeth. “Oh yes, gone very wrong. Can you guess what type I am?”

    “One,” Kenji replied flatly. “Type one that has gone seriously wrong.”

    The man-wolf took a step toward the five kages, sheer power rippling through his shaggy hind legs. “My name is Ken.”

    Takashi's eyes narrowed. “No...”

    A malicious glint passed through Ken's animal eyes. “But Takashi here may know me as Ken-sensei.”

    “No, no no–”

    “Takashi! Get a hold of yourself!” Kenji snapped, grabbing the back of Takashi's traveling cloak to restrain him from lunging at the smirking Ken.

    Nononooooooooo–”

    The string that held the cloak together fell apart and Takashi seemed to blur as the water particles around him went crazy–

    “Stop being such a dumbass–!!” Yukio never finished his sentence, directed toward Takashi, as he became blinded by the sudden mist–

    Hihari fell over, coughing blood, grasping her left shoulder–

    –and Hiro could be heard yelling Hihari's name as her blood was the only thing prominent in the thick mist–

    Ken stood there, seeing Takashi through the mist perfectly.

























































































    “Did you miss me, my dear nephew?”

    -

    -

    Eye-catch! He stands on the same cliff that she has once stood on, his hair whipping around his face, his people – forever loyal – faithfully lined up behind him.

    His serene eyes seem to age for a split (but only a split) second.

    They have been here.

    And once again, he signals that ever prominent signal (When will they ever find a home?) but he looks back because that outsider (hopefully his guest won't die just yet) probably does not know what it means.

    But always, he knows, that his people – his ever faithful people – will follow him.

    And that is all he needs.



    For now.
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Destinykil on Sun Apr 13 2008, 21:47

    beautiful....your welcome death
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Meika-Chan on Sun Apr 13 2008, 22:11

    Banzai! new chappie! =D
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Apr 14 2008, 07:59

    Destinykil wrote:beautiful....your welcome death
    I didn't need your support for SiS... -__-
    I am perfectly capable of updating without people pressuring me.
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Endless Nothing on Mon Apr 14 2008, 08:04

    It was my idea. The point was to show you how many people read your fanfic. I felt that maybe all you needed was a little push and requests from your fans would be just the push you needed. Looking back, maybe it was a bit excessive, but it worked to some extent.

    Nice update by the way. Lets try not to make it another two months before the next one alright?
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Mon Apr 14 2008, 10:08

    death-chan wrote:
    Destinykil wrote:beautiful....your welcome death
    I didn't need your support for SiS... -__-
    I am perfectly capable of updating without people pressuring me.

    Geezers, you say it!

    Des Pm'ed me to, I swear it!
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Destinykil on Mon Apr 14 2008, 15:10

    of course...lol
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Apr 14 2008, 21:58

    Endless Nothing wrote:It was my idea. The point was to show you how many people read your fanfic. I felt that maybe all you needed was a little push and requests from your fans would be just the push you needed. Looking back, maybe it was a bit excessive, but it worked to some extent.

    Nice update by the way. Lets try not to make it another two months before the next one alright?
    Meh.
    I am sure others out there write better.

    And yessir, *salutes*
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Apr 14 2008, 21:59

    Titaniumxvx wrote:
    death-chan wrote:
    Destinykil wrote:beautiful....your welcome death
    I didn't need your support for SiS... -__-
    I am perfectly capable of updating without people pressuring me.

    Geezers, you say it!

    Des Pm'ed me to, I swear it!
    Haha, I just love how you say that

    You'd be such an easy person to interrogate Evil Plan Evil Glare
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Hiiatte on Tue Apr 15 2008, 21:47

    wow....
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Meika-Chan on Tue Apr 15 2008, 23:17

    You should change the title of the thread, death-chan!
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[Ch11up o8.24.o9]]

    Post by Hiiatte on Tue Apr 15 2008, 23:23

    i like the title.

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