A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

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    A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Sun Mar 02 2008, 12:48

    Prolog - The Temple Of Ice - read our you'll be confused
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    Having 5 years passed since the groups adventure to the temple of ice, and, many things have changed!

    Trundra and Gust were now married and had there own familly the two were having a great life; having passed the chuunin exams 4 years earillier and Tundra was the kage of the valcano village and Gust was the head of the anbu.

    The rumers of the village was that the ice had fiqured out that the group had taken the treasure and that they were on there way to get it back.

    "So if these rumers are true then i should set up the barrier that they wont expect" said Tundra to gust

    "Hmm well make sure that the village knows"

    "Ok"

    With gust agreeing with tundra he set up the barrier

    The barrier was a think fog that when someone enters it they turn around without knowing it and even if they do get through there is a magma river surronding the village.

    "Ok now that the barrier is up i need to go to the academy and give the fore-head protectors to those who have passed"

    "ok i'll tell the anbus that they should patrol the village"

    Having gone to the academy and passed the academy students to genin the ice ninja arrived and it started

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    please wait for chapter 2 -the battle-


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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Sun Mar 02 2008, 12:48

    yah this chapter is short but it is just to tell what happens befor the battle
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sun Mar 02 2008, 12:52

    MORE PLEASE!
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Sun Mar 02 2008, 21:05

    negi that is all of this chapter
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Tue Mar 04 2008, 16:33

    ok i'm taking that only 1 person is interested in my FF and i'm not gona waste my time with posting them
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Wed Mar 05 2008, 21:22

    hey, sorry, didn't get around to reading it =D
    don't get discouraged!

    anyways, it was rather short, so I hope the next few chapters will have a little more action, and hopefully we will see what direction the plot is going.

    and, is tundra a guy or a girl?

    again, some grammar things, but I'd like to see more of your writing before I say anything else

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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Wed Mar 05 2008, 21:24

    tundra is a guy that is why he is married to gust
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Laura-Chan on Thu Mar 06 2008, 15:00

    Cliff hanger!
    cool, great beginning! ^_^
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Thu Mar 06 2008, 15:03

    that was the 2nd part u missed the prolog lol
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Laura-Chan on Thu Mar 06 2008, 15:14

    Oh....darn it! where's that?
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Thu Mar 06 2008, 15:17

    there is a link up there
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Thu Mar 06 2008, 20:35

    darkflame5019 wrote:tundra is a guy that is why he is married to gust

    .....gust is a girl, then?
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    Re: A New Beginning (Chapter 1 - 5 Years Later)

    Post by Darkflame on Fri Mar 07 2008, 16:43

    sabaku no ketsueki wrote:
    darkflame5019 wrote:tundra is a guy that is why he is married to gust

    .....gust is a girl, then?
    '

    if u paied attion 2 the 1st story u would know -hits saba over back of head-

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