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    My story(prologue)

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Jan 29 2008, 14:48

    as the sun sets, the twilit sky arises to cascade the world in sweet ambience. She sits down in the sand and stares up. The bright stars gleam as she falls back. The redeaming sky glaring back at her beautiful face. Only this time, she knew it were true. She rises to her feet very quickly and rushes towards the ocean; she stops. As she glances slowly upward, a star twinkles. Her face lights up with passionate tears rolling down her cheeks. The sun finally fades as she lay back down on the sand. A bizarre look comes her face as she stare up at the astounding constellations."what could it be" she wonders? As fluent as the waves she traces her hand over the constellation. The tears rolling down her soft cheeks stop. A scream is heard! Quickly, she stumbles to her feet, and follows the scream. With each panting breath she takes, the screams get louder. She is huffing to get to her destination. As she runs frantically, her lungs expand and she takes deeper beaths. A complete stop. She turns around, While doing so, she notices a misty veil covering the path behind her. A trig falls form a nearby tree...*clunk*! She falls to her knees scared. She notices it was just a twig. A sigh of relief escapes her mouth. Knees termbling, she manages to get back up in an upright position. A scream is heard again; only this time, more distant form where she heard it earlier. She then knew, that whatever was screaming was on the move! Out of breath she collapses on her back. Looking up at the illuminescant twilit sky, she knew this wasn't her chance. Gasping for air, she lays on the ground for another 20 minutes. Time passed quickly for her, she got back to her feet. Feeling relaxed, she walks calmly back to the beach. On her way there, she spots a man. Hiding behind the beah signpost, she gazes at this marvel in amazement. The man walks toward the water and stops. Coincidentall she thought? She nods and gazes on. He calmly rises his head toward the stars above him. She now knew that he was mimicking her somehow. She holds her hands behind her back and walks smoothly over towards him. He turns around in a quick motion, rubbing his eyes. She looks startled and backs up. It seems as though he was crying. She gets a little closer to him now. A long stare between each of them before.....he collapses into her arms. She falls over with him on top of her. A look of happiness crosses her face as the man lay on top of her. Staring blankly at the sky now, she moves the man over now laying on he sand.




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    Re: My story(prologue)

    Post by Darkflame on Tue Jan 29 2008, 15:19

    good job
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    Re: My story(prologue)

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Jan 29 2008, 15:20

    yah there smore but i wont type it now
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    Re: My story(prologue)

    Post by Darkflame on Tue Jan 29 2008, 15:21

    all i can say is there are a few spelling mistakes
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    Re: My story(prologue)

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Jan 29 2008, 15:46

    like...twilight.... i used twi lit like the twi lit sky
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    Re: My story(prologue)

    Post by Claud-kun on Tue Jan 29 2008, 15:48

    Des! It's pretty nice ^_^
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    Re: My story(prologue)

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Jan 29 2008, 16:41

    o_O wow..
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    Re: My story(prologue)

    Post by Destinykil on Tue Jan 29 2008, 18:33

    mhmm

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