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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:56

    Hehehe...

    I mean that I'm not surprised that Bano-kun can write something like it, I'd be surprised if Titaniumxvx-san could write it... >.>
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Tue Jan 29 2008, 18:26

    Got a new one! ....... Hehehe...



    A darkened sky; It blacks out the sun

    The sound of a storm; it drowns all other sound

    In the meadow; so long ago

    A memory; twisted and remade

    I will I find you; or where you even ever there?

    I laugh; or was that a lie?

    I cry; where the tears even real?

    Was it a real memory; or has it been twisted?


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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Claud-kun on Tue Jan 29 2008, 19:16

    This last one was like a bittersweet feeling.
    Nice.

    Banouin wrote:In the coroner of the darkened room; I see the eyes upon me
    I feel the breath; it cools my bones
    I feel your grasp; it holds me still
    I hear your voice; it tells me things so sweat
    I fall; Into your hold; Forevermore.


    This one is great!
    ^_^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Wed Jan 30 2008, 16:28

    I think the Bano has hit a all time new high..I think so far this one has to be my best wrok..But thats just me..



    In the garden; the one of my dreams

    A fallen angel comes before me; in the form of a lost one

    She holds a black rose; a testament

    I turn away; it can’t be true

    She sits; on the little bench; the one by the roses

    And she beckons me over; I do as I am told

    She looks me in my eyes and hands me the black rose

    She leans in and whispers in my ear; “it is a testament”

    Even now; she sits in the garden; the one of my dreams

    And every now and then; on that little bench next to the roses

    She picks a black rose as a testament


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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Wed Jan 30 2008, 16:29

    YEASH!!! It is the best one!!!
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Wed Jan 30 2008, 16:49

    Angelic Harmony wrote:YEASH!!! It is the best one!!!

    ^____^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Claud-kun on Wed Jan 30 2008, 18:22

    It's pretty nice ^_^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Venomu Veis on Wed Jan 30 2008, 18:56

    Hmm..
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Wed Jan 30 2008, 19:24

    I dont like the "Hmm.." dont like them Ven? Emo Corner
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Thu Feb 14 2008, 18:46

    Ok, Its been kinda a long time but I do have a few more but for now I am only going to add one.




    In the meadow; you sing me a lullaby as I rest on your shoulder

    And like infant I am pulled to sleep

    Unable to fight it; I wonder will I have a wonderfully dream; or a horrible nightmare

    A yawn escapes my mouth; and I fall into sleep, your lullaby the last thing I hear

    And I dream of you; still singing that lullaby in the meadow.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Feb 14 2008, 21:02

    *Smiles*

    Kawaii ^__^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Thu Feb 14 2008, 21:42

    lol i knew you would like it charm ^_^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Feb 14 2008, 22:39

    i luv the one about the black rose & the garden.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by jake989 on Fri Feb 15 2008, 11:26

    Wow Ban really been working hard I see!
    Very nice work here, like Deathy said put them all in a book and then you will be know round the world for your wonderful work!
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Fri Feb 15 2008, 15:09

    XD lol, well this next one..idk if you can call it a poem but eh



    We only get one try at life so you should live it and be happy.

    Some people look all there lives for that happiness only to see in the end that it was right in front of them.

    Others; see it but don’t think they need it or they can’t get a hold of it.

    There are a few that find a love and will do anything to make them happy even if it’s a life without them in it.

    Fewer still find that love and live happy until the end of there days.

    In the end, only few find that true happiness that we look all our lives for, But hell even if we don’t find it, we can say we gave it are all and never gave up, I don’t know about you, but I want to look even if I never find it and I want to be able to say “I lived the way I wanted and I gave it my all and even if I never found my happiness, I got to see it in so many along the way, Even a few that I loved I let go and let them do what made them happy.”

    kinda long >.>


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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Reenami-Chan on Fri Feb 15 2008, 17:05

    Man, you have great skills ^^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Feb 15 2008, 21:57

    so deep that last poem bano.AMAZING!
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Kazekage*Gaara on Wed Feb 20 2008, 23:42

    Simply beautiful. ^O^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Thu Mar 13 2008, 22:00

    ..Yo....the bano is not going to let this die..and is going to make his Big comeback soon ^-^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Sat Mar 15 2008, 20:52

    BOOM The Bano is back, Rofl

    Have you ever felt hell's flame?
    The fire of the damned; You will never see anything more scary in all your yrs to come.
    I endured it all, you may call me a fool.
    And so I am..A fool...maybe a wise man would have never gone.
    But I did it all for love. If that gets me the one I love..
    I would die a fool long before i die a wise man


    Well!? Puppy Dog Eyes Tell the Bano what you think..^-^

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