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    Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:30

    Dont make fun of the Bano, Here i am going to put up some of my work as in Poems/sayings i come up with. Plz tell me what you think..I will try to keep adding more to this Like one time a week or so, I hope you like it.

    here are a few...Some of you have seen them but oh well


    "I breathe another sigh; if only to myself
    Say your name; if only in a whisper
    See you there; if only in a dream
    Give an embrace; if only to the open air
    I dont miss you; If only a lie"








    "I had a dream last night

    In this dream; we kissed

    And for once I was happy

    Then; I woke

    And to my despair; it was only a dream

    You were the sweetest dream within all my nightmares"



    "I have seen worlds not fit for the normal eyes, Worlds that differ from the ones seat before your waking eyes. Your ignorance blinds you, Binds you to see nothing more then what you are told to see. Take my hand Ill be your eyes, Will show you that we are worlds apart"



    Like i said..I will add more...


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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Kazekage*Gaara on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:32

    That's really good! Hi
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by jake989 on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:33

    Nice stuff!
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:34

    Wow..That was fast...^__^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:38

    awesome poetry.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:40

    I love the last one so much o.O
    Your GREAT Bano-kun!
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:41

    Thinking about it now...This may have gone better in the art one.....I may see if Q or Pf or someone can move it...Idk
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Fri Jan 25 2008, 22:42

    Angelic Harmony wrote:I love the last one so much o.O
    Your GREAT Bano-kun!

    I liked it alot too ^__^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:47

    The first one is depressingly amazing, you should subnit it to a poetry website.

    Seriously, awesome work, Bano.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:50

    Titaniumxvx wrote:The first one is depressingly amazing, you should subnit it to a poetry website.

    Seriously, awesome work, Bano.

    ^_^ ty titan
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Fri Jan 25 2008, 23:55

    Np.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Naruto-Eats-Ramen on Sat Jan 26 2008, 03:16

    ...good stuff... the first one seems sympathetic...
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Jan 26 2008, 11:25

    Damn, sonn o_O

    Crazy.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:13

    death-chan wrote:Damn, sonn o_O

    Crazy.

    ...>.> ...Is that a good damn....Or a bad one Hehehe...
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Claud-kun on Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:45

    I think is a good one Bano ^_^
    Nice! I was expecting this.
    Keep up the good work dude!
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:52

    Ok well Guys, like I said I would add more...I did not know if i should just edit it into my 1st post...But eh...Anyway..i got 2 more for you guys. As always...tell me what you think ^_^




    What lies behind those hazel eyes?

    Captivated; they draw me in.

    May I see; my love?

    Or is my heart to dark with hate?

    My eyes to blind to see?

    My mind to black to grasp your light?

    Tell me, my love; what lies behind your hazel eyes?




    Torn; divided I stand

    Unable, unwilling to find my ground

    Why am I forced to choose?

    I embrace one; I deny the other

    I stand in the center; unwilling and unable to find my ground





    Ya...so tell me what you think..
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Jan 26 2008, 22:55

    Make a book.

    And dedicate it to us ^_^
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Jan 26 2008, 23:20

    Banouin wrote:Ok well Guys, like I said I would add more...I did not know if i should just edit it into my 1st post...But eh...Anyway..i got 2 more for you guys. As always...tell me what you think ^_^




    What lies behind those hazel eyes?

    Captivated; they draw me in.

    May I see; my love?

    Or is my heart to dark with hate?

    My eyes to blind to see?

    My mind to black to grasp your light?

    Tell me, my love; what lies behind your hazel eyes?




    Torn; divided I stand

    Unable, unwilling to find my ground

    Why am I forced to choose?

    I embrace one; I deny the other

    I stand in the center; unwilling and unable to find my ground





    Ya...so tell me what you think..

    Torn; divided I stand

    Unable, unwilling to find my ground


    Why am I forced to choose?

    I embrace one; I deny the other

    I stand in the center; unwilling and unable to find my ground


    I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Venomu Veis on Sat Jan 26 2008, 23:57

    Creative.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Sun Jan 27 2008, 04:18

    ..Well...This may be a lil soon..But I have been working my but off with my work and have one more for you guys, I dont think its as good as my others..But...i will see what you guts think..


    Blood fills the eyes

    Regret grasps the mind

    Whats next; nothing?

    Fight for breath

    And say your goodbyes








    The foot prints set in the snow

    I see your path before me; why do I hesitate?

    I take a step; that I know was yours

    Why then do I take two steps back?

    You told me not to stray

    Why then do I feel I must?

    I take a step forward and to my disbelief

    Its not the path you took.


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    Post by Titaniumxvx on Mon Jan 28 2008, 20:51

    What lies behind those hazel eyes?

    Captivated; they draw me in.

    May I see; my love?

    Or is my heart to dark with hate?

    My eyes to blind to see?

    My mind to black to grasp your light?

    Tell me, my love; what lies behind your hazel eyes?



    --------------------------------------------

    That's my absolute fav. one.
    Amazing. Haha, I imagine your girlfreind having hazel eyes and you trying to figure her out. Awesome.

    And Venomu, how'd you change your username to Venomu Veis?
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Jan 28 2008, 21:50

    Titaniumxvx-san, you wrote that? O__O

    And Nomu asked me about what to change it to! *ish happy*

    And he said that he's not going to spend too much time on wotn anymore.... T_T
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:04

    No, it was Bano

    And you...you can change your username?? How?
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:11

    Oh...

    And you have to ask a kage.
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    Re: Ok I dont know if this fits here...But

    Post by Banouin on Mon Jan 28 2008, 22:36

    2bloodly2love wrote:Oh...

    And you have to ask a kage.

    I like how its good when you think titan did it but only "Oh" when its me


    Pity ...well Anyway



    I give a hand; to the one that needed it most

    I pulled them up; gave them a shoulder to lean on

    I wiped away there tears; even if more replace them

    I became there shield; tacking the hit

    I was there; within there darkest hour

    I was there when I walked with them; into the light.




    A tangled dream; a nightmare woven so tight

    In the coroner of the darkened room; I see the eyes upon me

    I feel the breath; it cools my bones

    I feel your grasp; it holds me still

    I hear your voice; it tells me things so sweat

    I fall; Into your hold; Forevermore.


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