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    Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Fri Jan 11 2008, 00:50

    Chapter Three) Intermission 1:

    You get home and think over all that you had heard that day. "It felt like it took a few days, but it was just a few seconds. I'm exhausted." you say to no one in particular. You walk into your room where you see your dog lying on your bed waiting for you to come home. He jumps up and tackles you, licking your face as you get to your bed.
    You finally get into bed and fall asleep within a few minutes. You dream of being in the illusion and seeing the Akatsuki symbol, a single red cloud. As four swords tips come together touching in the middle of the symbol. The red cloud fades away as the four blades begin to glow brightly.
    Awakening at 3:00 am you sit up and rub your eyes. "I need to get this out of my head somehow." you say to yourself as you getting up for the third time tonight. Not believing what you are saying "I wonder if that old guy is sleeping well..." your steely gray/black eyes shine a bit as you drift back to sleep.
    Again you dream of the same thing only its more in depth. You see the Akatsuki symbol and see the Katana blade of the Hyoujin, the Sakabatou(reversed edge) blade of the Eisei, the double edged blade of the Kusanagi and the glowing white Chakra Blade, all come together at the tips as the Akatsuki symbol disperses. You open your eyes and they flash red.
    The blind man walks into a seemingly empty room. "Hello Kisame. Its been a while." "Yes it has Itachi." Kisame responds. Itachi moves the hood he was wearing off of his head. "I found you." Itachi mutters to himself.
    "Kisame..." Itachi says, "i just have a few days left to live...and i found..." Kisame interjects "the last Uchiha!!?!"

    A/N: I know its a short chapter but i have writers block and it kills me to not keep up with everyone else that is writing fanfics...and yes i am open to ideas on what to do...just PM me...
    -Renden


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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by knssquad on Fri Jan 11 2008, 01:12

    nice Oh Yeah!
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Fri Jan 11 2008, 01:20

    Awsome!!
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Jan 15 2008, 20:51

    okay..question...why does no one ever post on my threads???
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Tue Jan 15 2008, 21:32

    It's a short chapter. Maybe they want more.
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by theBOSS. on Tue Jan 15 2008, 22:13

    lol, Charm hit dead on.
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Wed Jan 16 2008, 00:48

    it said Teaser as in i can't figure out how to continue...

    now its the whole chapter...its an Intermission...its short...
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Wed Jan 16 2008, 19:48

    FULL CHAPTER PEOPLE!!?!
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Choushi on Thu Jan 17 2008, 02:01

    its ok dude.....as long as they like it.....its all good...lol
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Jan 17 2008, 02:07

    At least it's longer Ren-kun, and Choushi-kun is right. People love your stories.
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by knssquad on Thu Jan 17 2008, 10:29

    nice Oh Yeah!
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Thu Jan 17 2008, 19:21

    people tend to ignore them though... Emo Corner
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by knssquad on Thu Jan 17 2008, 20:18

    -tilts head-

    have you tried telling all of them that their is a new chapter?
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Thu Jan 17 2008, 20:22

    i do...but i have to say to them "read my fanfic please" and then only half read it... Despair
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by knssquad on Thu Jan 17 2008, 21:06

    jeez, just don't worry about it ^ ^ ^

    I'm off to find japanese names for my charries
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Fri Jan 18 2008, 02:25

    *sighs*...its still not that good...whatever...another one bites the dust...
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by knssquad on Fri Jan 18 2008, 12:50

    You cheer up, mister, or I will sic one of those creepy clowns on you to shove anti-depressants down your throat, in fact, I could do that myself Cowboy
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by crack2 on Fri Jan 18 2008, 17:02

    niceeeeeeeeee
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Sat Jan 19 2008, 21:48

    obviously this is a waste of time...trashing this...
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by knssquad on Sat Jan 19 2008, 21:54

    Your expectations are too high -.-.-
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Sat Jan 19 2008, 22:23

    no one likes it that much...its easier to just trash the whole project...
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Jan 19 2008, 22:46

    Trash that thing and I will fly down to your freaking house and tie you up to your freaking computer chair and make you type out the whole story with a freaking TOOTHPICK.
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Sat Jan 19 2008, 22:50

    *sighs*...you guys sure don't publicize it like you do Charm's...or Sori's...or Yurri's...or Choushi's...or Deathy's...no real point in this...
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    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Jan 19 2008, 22:58

    .........what?
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:3

    Post by Renden2005 on Sat Jan 19 2008, 23:05

    everyone talks about all of you guys fanfics...but not mine...why no one like's it is beyond me...but whatever...please get a kage in here to lock this thread...

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