new name!! WOTN CHRONICLES by renden and choushi [chapter 2]

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    new name!! WOTN CHRONICLES by renden and choushi [chapter 2]

    Post by Choushi on Mon Jan 07 2008, 21:49

    we decided to change the name because we have big ideas for the future of this...so yea.....i am greatful that all of u like this story and would personally like to thank all of you who tell us to write more chapters....and if you guys would like to talk about it....just talk....or send us some ideas for the ff.....dont be scared...cuz the more you send us ideas.....the easier it'll be...and the more we want to do it cuz we kno we have all of your support....so without further adeu.....heres chapter 2...

    WOTN Chronicles

    *as choushi and renden leave Q goes into another room its dark*

    Q:
    i couldnt help but come in here...*sighs*

    *turns
    light switch on and as the room illuminates it is filled with bookselfs
    and display cases...but what is in them is unclear because it is
    covered with a thick blanket of dust*

    Q:
    *coughs* wow..it has
    been a long time since i visited this room *coughs again* and all this
    dust isnt good for my health....i wish choushi was here to blow all
    this dust off...oh well *takes a deep breath..pauses and exhales as all
    the dust is blown off*

    *the room is suddenly clear to identify what it is..*

    Q:
    the
    ol' shrine room...man..*grabs a curved piece of wood with a string
    connecting both sides* heh...my first bow *puts it down gently and next
    to where he put his bow he sees a helmet...old and rusty but the blue
    paint that remains gleams with pride* Oh my gosh..*picks up the helmet
    and as he does memories start rushing through his head*

    *flash back*

    Q:
    so do we have peace jose? *sticks out hand* old buddy?

    Jose:
    Fine, we have peace...*goes to meet Q's hand but as he does the sound of two clashing swords ring throughout the area*

    *Q
    and jose both look to find renden and one of jose's seven swordsman
    amateratsu in a deadlock their swords both differing in size but
    niether giving up ground....Q and jose both look at each other and jump
    back away from each other*

    Q:
    *he lands on the ground right
    in front of the main army with his other shinobi that were in the
    center following right behind him..* I thought we had peace Jose!!!!!!

    Jose:
    *lands
    with only six of his swordsman as amateratsu is still in the center
    with renden staring him down with his hazel eyes now glowing* I THOUGHT YOU HAD BETTER CONTROL OF YOUR
    DOGS!!!!

    sori:
    what does renden think he's doing!! he knows that that's one of the legendary swordsman!!!

    jake:
    dont wory sori.....renden is fast...not to mention the greatest swordsman in Suna...he knows what he's doing

    Q:
    *thinking* why renden???? why?? well. i hope you have a way out of this perdicament....you always do...

    Jose:
    DRAW
    YOUR WEAPONS!!!!!!! * the seathing of a million swords different
    sizes...different steels....all at the same time fill the eardums of
    all in the vicinity* ITS TIME TO FIGHT!!!!!!!

    Q:
    *thinking*
    is this what you wanted renden??? well if jose wants to fight....lets
    give him what he wants!!! *Speaking* SUNAAA!!!!! *different weapons are
    unleashed and many small pheonixes light up the eyes of
    some....signature of the makai clan*

    choushi:
    i'm ready Q-sama....

    Q:
    *takes a deep breath* CHARGE!!!!!!!!!

    Jose:
    he's really going to fight?!?!? never thought i'd see the day...heheh...CHARGE

    *both armies run twoard each other with full force and meet in the middle right where renden and amateratsu are*

    Koneko:
    *looks
    at her opponent* why do you send me such weaklings *her claws and fangs
    intact she pounces on the opponent slashing the opponents face*

    Choushi:
    SOUND
    TELEPORTATION!!!!! *a split second after he dissapears he reapears
    right in the middle of the mists army* Q!!!!!!!! Q!!!!!!!

    *End of flashback*

    Choushi:
    Q....Q...Q
    wake up man.....we've been looking all over for you......renden and i
    were wondering where u were....then ori showed us to this room

    renden:
    yea....i
    didnt even kno this room was here......*looks at one of the scrolls*
    hey! this is the scroll admiting choushi to live here....wow...this is
    old

    *another flashback*

    *sori, Q, and renden walk to the kazekage's office with choushi in the back looking a bit better with some water in him*

    Q:
    we're almost there..

    sori:
    hi my name is sori....*puts out hand*

    choushi:
    *suprized* oh....my...na...name...is .....choushi.....thanx for saving me back there...

    sori:
    no prob.....but i see that there is some good chakra inside of you....if not i would've stabbed u myself...no lie

    choushi:

    !!!!! Hehehe... !!!!!!

    Q:
    hey lovebirds.....we're here

    *all four young ninja look up slowly at the large tower its height paralleled by none other*

    choushi:
    WOW!!!! is this where the kazekage is????/

    renden:
    yes....now let us go...

    *inside the tower*

    gaara:
    sooooo much paperwork......sooo many missions....uuugh....man i need a break....

    *theres a knock on the door*

    Gaara:
    come in *looking down at the paperwork*

    Q:*leaves choushi outside the door just in case*
    Kazekage sama....can u plz do us a little favor

    Gaara:
    what is it *still looking down*

    Q:
    can u do us a favor.....

    *interrupts*

    Gaara:*still looking down*
    sure....but
    on one condition.....carry out this small mission for me......a ladys
    purse was stolen yesterday so i need you to carry out this mission with
    ur friends...i kno....ur sensei is not with you...but i need this
    really bad....so can u do it??? *slides the paperwork to them*

    renden:
    *gets over there and picks up the paperwork...and reads it.....* sure gaara-sama.....then will you do us a favor.

    gaara:
    i promise *looks up and into rendens eyes* and you can count on it....believe it!!!! Oh Yeah!

    Q,Sori, and Renden:
    OMG NO!
    were gonna leave now gaara sama *leave the room slowly but dash through
    the hall once out the door* he's been spending too much time with the
    hokage again...

    *Choushi
    stands and faces Gaara as he puts his right hand up to the Aori Kane on
    his back*...I challenge you Gaara. for the honor...OF THE KINUTA
    CLAN!!!!!

    *end of flashback*

    Q:
    those were some good times....hehe....

    *yurri comes in the room*
    yurri:
    hey guys....guys....its time to go to the banquet.....the peace banquet....

    renden:
    oh has it been that long already???

    *flash back*

    *the sounds of war ring through the air as an army larger than the two battling villages combined nears quietly*

    *renden
    and amaterasu both stop their blades holding each others back as they
    feel a great chakra pressure that few others felt as the army draws
    closer*
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    Re: new name!! WOTN CHRONICLES by renden and choushi [chapter 2]

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Mon Jan 07 2008, 21:59

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
    GOD!!!
    I am the number 1 fan of this writing!!!!!
    *Holds up giant sign*

    I ♥ CHOUSHI/RENDEN'S STORIES!!!
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    Post by jake989 on Mon Jan 07 2008, 21:59

    NICE!
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    Re: new name!! WOTN CHRONICLES by renden and choushi [chapter 2]

    Post by Choushi on Mon Jan 07 2008, 22:01

    thanx.....have a great time reading........guys...
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    Re: new name!! WOTN CHRONICLES by renden and choushi [chapter 2]

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Jan 07 2008, 22:04

    .... I am at a loss for words.

    *holds up sign*
    READ WOTN CHRONICLES OR SUFFER A SLOW AND BLOODY DEATH.
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    Post by Choushi on Mon Jan 07 2008, 23:50

    lol...funny one death.....
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    Post by knssquad on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:35

    awesome
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    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:35

    thank you kns...
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:37

    thanx kns
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    Post by knssquad on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:37

    :O you people reply fast

    Cowboy I am off to read Saiyo's cuz it's gory
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    Post by Saiyo on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:37

    nice
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:37

    huh wat do u mean
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    Post by Saiyo on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:39

    nice as in good as in yay i think it will go somewere nice
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    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:43

    lol...good one Saiyo-chan...
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:43

    oh thanx....but i meant it to be 4 kns.....but thank you
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    Post by Saiyo on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:44

    oh... READ MINE AND POST
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:47

    i did......its great
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    Post by Saiyo on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:49

    u didn't coment though
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:50

    yea....i was 1st.....
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    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:51

    i would...but i gtg in 10 minutes...
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    Post by Saiyo on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:51

    oh yeah...
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    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:54

    yea...but i will...promise...
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    Post by Saiyo on Tue Jan 08 2008, 00:56

    good wait have u guys been reading all the cpas so far?
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    Post by Kiami on Tue Jan 08 2008, 02:08

    Oh Yeah!
    Great story Choushi, Renden!
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    Post by Choushi on Tue Jan 08 2008, 03:16

    thanx kia......well goodnight everybody!!!

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