a window of time. chpt. 1

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    a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by mung kuan on Fri Jan 04 2008, 01:23

    -kari's thoughts-

    recently things haven't been great with sensei...he's well...okay, he's a perv, he's jiraiya reincarnated!
    (god rest his pervy soul...)

    -walking to the training grounds-

    kari:*sigh*
    Hiy ori: see you later! *waving*
    kari: yeah, sure.

    -once kari gets there she notices(for once) that hanu-chan beat her there-

    hanu: Heya Kari! *glomp*
    kari:...need..air...*gasp*
    hanu:*letting go* did you hear? sensei was sent on a mission, he left instructions, apparently there has been another ninja gone missing.
    kari: well, good news, he's not here. *kari said cheering up*
    hanu: BE SERIOUS! the only link in the victoms is they ALL had kekkei genkai. WHAT IF THEY GET KUNO!?

    kari:oh..didn't think of that..what are we doing today? what did the perv give us?
    hanu: he didn't put much thought in it..were doing laps...
    kari:perfect..

    -ceilia shows up-

    ceilia: so what are we doing?
    hanu&kari:*moan* laps around the village.
    ceilia: okay, lets start before i change my mind.

    -running-

    kari:this.sucks.i.can't.breath.
    ceilia: how many more?!
    hanu: 10 left! PUSH PUSH PUSH!
    kari&ceilia:*sigh*

    -ceilia stops from exaustion-

    ceilia:can't breath..i need a sec, go ahead kari.

    -hanu still running-
    hanu: CYA!

    kari: she's unreal... i'll rest with you, we'll catch up to "super hanu" later.
    ceilia: X-X sure...
    hanu:so what have you heard about the case with missing ninja?
    ceilia: only that ninja with bloodlines go missing, why?
    kari: nothing, i just don't know why they would take those ninja, it's not like they can use the bloodline..
    ceilia:yeah, i know, i don't get it either.

    -they hear a crack in a near by tree branch-

    kari: HUH?!
    kuno: aaah! *falls*
    kuno:ow...
    kari: KUNO-NEE! *glomp*
    celia:HA! hi kuno!
    kuno: i skipped training!
    kari:awsome!
    kuno:wheres hanu?
    ceilia:5 miles that way. *points*
    kuno: hahaha! shoulda' figured.
    ceilia:...do you feel that?...
    kari:no..
    kuno: me neither, you sure your not being paranoid?
    ceilia:no..guys...were being tracked...
    ceilia:i'm serious, we gotta go!
    kari:huh?
    kuno:she's right! *standing up* i can see them! *byaakugaan*
    kari:what if they're from our village? *stands next to kuno*
    ceilia:they're too good at it, it took me too long to notice...
    ceilia:*dodges shuriken* GO! I'LL HOLD THEM OFF!
    kari:no, you need our help! *positions*
    kuno:no, she's right, we'll go get hiy ori! *grabs kari* COME ON!

    -ninja places himself infront of ceilia-

    hooded ninja:you don't know who your dealing with, give us your friend
    *points to kari* and i'll go!
    ceilia: you don't know who your dealing with!
    *hand signs*
    ceilia: despairing pit justu!
    (a genjustu making the opponent beleive they are falling, blocking sight)
    hooded ninja:w-what did you do to me?...
    *pulls out puppet scroll*
    *cuts finger*
    ceilia:HECKTOR ATTACK!
    *hecktor summons harpoon*
    hooded ninja: *hand signs* release! *jumps over ceilia*
    hooded ninja: fire style! searing destruction.
    *destroys hecktor*
    ceilia's thoughts: okay wtf? he's too strong, i've gotta get out of here..
    ceilia: white flash justu!
    (temporarily blinds opponent giving escaping oportunity)

    -attempts escape-

    ...lol'z..-meanwhile-

    -at hiy ori's house-

    kari: HIY ORI!
    hiy ori: hi kari, kuno, what happened you look terrible.
    kuno: *spazzing out inchoherent babble*
    kari:*covers his mouth* we we're attacked, i'm almost certain it was a rouge ninja...
    kuno: they were after kari...i don't understand it...
    kari: ceilia stayed back to help, OH NO! she's still there!

    -somebody covered in ash busts in the door-

    kari: c-ceilia?
    ceilia:*brushing self off* yeah..i got away, he stopped following.
    kari: did you find out what he wanted?
    ceilia: oh that, yeah i thought it was appropriate to ask him WHY HE WAS THROWING FIRE!...no, i don't know..
    kuno: well..do you think it had anything to do with the recent disappearances?
    hiy ori: i wouldn't rule that out, but he was after kari, not kuno...
    hiy ori:hmmm....i'm going to meet with somebody who might know more...
    you guys should get some rest...
    ceilia:oh,it's late! *paniced*
    kuno:it is? *looks outside* it is, i just thought somebody turned the lights off..
    ceilia:*hits kuno* let's just go.
    kuno: kari, are you sure you want to be alone? you were attacked.
    kari: i'll be fine, i'm going to go to sleep.
    kuno:okay. *ceilia&kuno leave*
    kari's thoughts: why would that guy want me?...*sleeps*


    -meanwhile-


    -in the forest that night-

    keayo:so?..why am i here?
    hiy ori: i thought you might be able to help.
    keayo: with?..
    hiy ori: kari was nearly captured today by a rouge ninja.
    keayo:..oh,no..damn, not now...
    hiy ori: you knew! why didn't you warn me?!
    keayo: compose yourself, i didn't think it'd come to this...
    hiy ori: what are you talking about?
    keayo: the ken-sei...
    hiy ori: *disbeleif/shock*why..w-what do they want with her?..
    keayo:....
    hiy ori: keayo! what do they want with her! she's useless to them!
    keayo: you never learned...
    keayo: when i was in their organization i learned something..
    keayo: about your family...
    hiy ori: out with it!
    keayo: your family has a kekkei genkai, you didn't inheret it...
    thats why you never knew...
    hiy ori:..thats not possible...
    keayo:but it is..it's rumored to be the most powerful of them all...
    so powerful it consumed your whole clan...
    hiy ori: why didn't you tell me?!
    keayo:..it lost importance, when you didn't gain it, i thought it was lost...
    hiy ori: why is it so feared?...
    keayo: wish i knew...only the ken-sei understand it...
    keayo:..kari, kari is the last surviving person with the nameless power...


    -more laterz!-


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    Re: a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Fri Jan 04 2008, 01:25

    WAH!!! I want more!!!

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    Post by knssquad on Fri Jan 04 2008, 01:40

    GO NII!!!!
    WOOHOO!!!
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    Re: a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by mung kuan on Fri Jan 04 2008, 01:46

    Blushing thanks.
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    Post by knssquad on Fri Jan 04 2008, 01:52

    mung kuan wrote:Blushing thanks.

    -pinches cheeks-

    blushy wushy X3
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    Post by Choushi on Fri Jan 04 2008, 01:56

    nice dude.....i like the interaction and chemistry between the characters..... Oh Yeah!
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Jan 04 2008, 02:00

    begging for more.^^ Oh Yeah!
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    Re: a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Fri Jan 04 2008, 23:48

    :O OMGZ I LOVE IT SO MUCH YOU CANNOT EVEN IMAGINE IT
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    Post by knssquad on Fri Jan 04 2008, 23:58

    SO GOOD!!! Happy
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    Post by Koneko_Bozu8 on Sat Jan 05 2008, 00:23

    Kone thought it was AWESOME!!! ^-^
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    Re: a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Jan 05 2008, 01:38

    NYA! HOLY CRAP NII!!!
    It rocks!
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    Re: a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by mung kuan on Sat Jan 05 2008, 10:49

    *blink*

    really?...

    i didn't think it was "holy crap" worthy...

    but thanks! :3
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    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Jan 05 2008, 12:15

    good mother of God.

    write more Oh Yeah!
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    Re: a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by Kiami on Sat Jan 05 2008, 17:45

    Wow, great fanfic Mumu-kun!
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    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Sun Jan 06 2008, 10:54

    Crying my poor hector!!!
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    Re: a window of time. chpt. 1

    Post by mung kuan on Sun Jan 06 2008, 11:33

    -___-;;

    hecktor lives....

    but thanks for the support everyone!~
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    Post by knssquad on Sun Jan 06 2008, 19:35

    Ooooo......

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    Post by Guest on Mon Jan 07 2008, 13:14

    it was pretty good mung kuan
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    Post by Kiami on Mon Jan 07 2008, 16:33

    Cliffy -.-"
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    Post by knssquad on Wed Jan 16 2008, 18:38

    Oh Yeah!

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