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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:15

    WOTN: SAND CHRONICLES...written by: choushi, renden, and ok'ed by Q

    *a man sitting in a
    chair by himself...his face and body changed by the sands of time and
    the heat of battle...he wears a straw hat and resembles a famous pirate
    (Monkey D. Luffy if my memory serves me right)..he is accompanied by two
    other old men with brushes and scrolls in hand*

    Q*looking through window at his flourishing village*:
    you
    know...Renden....Choushi...we've been through a lot and we've grown so
    much....and you would think that being Kazekage would be hard....but
    with villagers, council members, and shinobi like mine.....it made my
    job that much easier...i can remember those early days like it were
    yesterdy

    *flash back*

    *Renden
    is wearing an anbu mask, the phoenix tattoo on his right arm blazing
    and Choushi is wearing his face wrap (customary for a kinuta) while Q is
    in the front with his sand bow in hand*

    *a thick blanket of mist
    covers the earth making the air moist and perfect for
    manipulation....the sun is just rising on both armies..one in brown
    with sand shields and helmets resembling the mighty spartans..the other
    in blue heavy in armor similar to that of the ancient majestic samurai*

    *Jose,
    leader and kage of the mist, steps foward into the middle with seven
    shinobi each with swords in their hands behind the Mizukage....Q does
    the same as houshi, Renden, Sori, DOS, Yuriishi, and Jake follow each
    having a sand shield and their own unique weapon in hand*

    Q:
    im
    filled with sorrow that we couldnt settle this peacefully Jose...but my
    heart is filled with anger that you decided to bring your men to my
    land....so we shall settle this your way, and you will pay for this motion of
    disrespect to me, my villagers, and most of all, to my country..

    Jose:
    *scoffs*
    you think i care about your puny village.....we are the mist...the
    warriors
    of the land of waves...strongest in the world you can't......*looks
    down at the kazekage*.....even think about defeating us...U MUST BE
    MAD!!!!

    Renden:
    *points
    his orange blade at the Mizukage* sometimes all you need is a little
    madness...its how i've gotten by...*smirks confidently*

    Jose:
    *doesn't
    move a muscle* you should really keep your dogs on a leash Quater.
    otherwise you may just lose them. *glares at a smirking Renden*

    *the exchange of words is heard between both armies firing them up for battle.*

    Q:
    you
    come to my village....with an army of millions.....insult my
    village...*pulls arrow out and aims for the mizukage's head*....GIVE ME
    1 REASON TO NOT END YOUR LIFE RIGHT NOW!!!!!

    Jose:
    *pulls out
    sword and points it at the kazekage's neck* because....i know....you
    aren't stupid....*an evil smirk engulfs the mizukage's face*

    Q:
    *points
    bow twoard the sky and takes his aim from the head of jose....jose
    takes his sword and raises it to the sky the reflection of the sun
    glaring off of the steel of his sword...*fine...but don't expect this peace to last Jose

    *end of flash back*

    Renden:
    there wasn't much that could've been done Q-sama...

    Choushi:
    yes, if we hadn't resisted then the village of Sunagakure would be gone...

    Q:
    You both are right.....lets think about better things....war always clouds my mind with regretful thoughts.......

    Renden:
    well...dont you remember how we both got our nicknames???

    Q:
    The Red Pheonix of Suna????

    Renden:
    yes...that one...

    Q:
    and you Choushi The White Noise of Suna.

    Renden:
    personally
    i like The Red Pheonix of Suna...lol....Choushi why do they call u The White Noise of Suna????? i forgot...

    Q:
    u must be kidding.....to remember that, you have to remember how he got here.....i recall that day faintly

    *Flashback*

    Renden:
    hey *nudges a young Q* Hey *nudges him again making Q off balence* HEY!!?! *PUSHES Q INTO THE SAND*

    Q:
    lol sorry Rendino.....wat r u lookin at mate?

    Renden:
    that guy...out in the distance...he looks pretty beat up...

    Q:
    i guess we should go help him (sarcasticly).......hahahhahah.....what a joke....

    Renden:
    fine...this
    would look good on your resume if u ever want to be the Kazekage...but
    i guess i'll do it alone...*gives Q his trademark smirk as he walks
    toward the man in the distance*

    Q:
    GREAT IDEA!!!! *runs to guy who has collapsed in the sand*
    HEY!!!! do u need some help.?

    Choushi:
    *voice is hoarse and cant speak clearly* please...water....

    Q:
    ok we'll take you back to the village asap

    Renden:
    R U SURE ABOUT THAT???he has a sound nin headband...

    Q:
    *looks at Renden as he picks up a fainted Choushi* if i am to be kazekage i have to put my trust in some people....

    Renden:
    fine fine...your call *helps Q bring him to the village*

    Sori:
    hey guys...who is that?

    Renden:
    i don't know...but he needs water now...*looks at her and she understands*

    Q:
    *laying Choushi in the nearest yard as Sori brings him a gallon jug of water*

    Sori:
    umm...will he be okay?

    Renden:
    i'm
    sure he will be okay...but that's what he gets for wearing bandages
    around his body and face in the desert like he is...*attempts to take
    off some bandages*...cant drink water with all these bandages...

    Choushi:
    *grabs Renden's hand and pushes it away* i dont mean to be rude but i cannot take off these bandages..

    Renden:
    *suprized*
    wow.....u
    spoke that sentence pretty clearly.... what r u trying to pull????
    *pulls out dagger with a pheonix emblem etched upon it
    and points it at choushi's heart*

    Choushi:
    im sorry to rub off on the wrong way but it is that these wrapings are sacred to my clan.

    Q:
    *thinks
    back a few years earlier to when he went to the chuunin exams...he had
    seen a boy with wrapings around his body too...he was from the sound
    village* where r u from exactly..

    Choushi:
    my name is
    Choushi Kinuta from Otogakure....well at least whats left of it...my
    village was destroyed by Orochimaru-sama...my clan all
    slaughtered...these...these bandages are that of my cousin's..Dosu

    Q:
    *EYES
    OPEN WIDE* DOSU!?!!?!?!? the sound nin???? you...you are his cousin
    *remembers all the horibble things that Dosu had done to the other nin*
    RENDEN HE'S BAD KILL HIM!!!!!
    *Renden goes to stab Choushi*

    Sori:
    NOO!! dont kill him.....i sense some good chakra in him

    *Choushi looks at Sori with grattitude*
    Choushi:
    thank
    you ma'am...what i was going to say is that im here to avenge my
    cousins death....he was killed in battle by a man named Gaara....i must
    confront him....to at least honor my cousins death...

    Renden:
    i think we should at least give him that much Q...its only honorable...

    Q:
    geeze Renden...you and your honor...alright....i'll show you the way to the Kazekage's tower

    *end of flashback*

    *Q
    looks out into the village again....darkness has shown herself upon the
    village....the little lights from below fill Q's eyes reminding him of
    the war between suna and mist not too long ago*

    Q:
    thats enough reminicing for today guys....we shoud turn in....and maybe head back down memory lane tomorrow

    Choushi and Renden:
    as you wish Kazekage-sama *both bow and leave the room*


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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:24

    So awsome Choushi-kun!!! Oh man! Sheesh, Ren-kun gives no second thoughts in wanting to kill, neh? ^__^

    Dude, seriously, right waaaay more!!!
    Oh Yeah!
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:27

    yay you r the first one to comment on the ff......congrats BUDDY!!!! lol

    you win a thumbs up Oh Yeah!
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:27

    Cowboy
    I feel special.

    You get two thumbs up for right the very great story!
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    Post by jake989 on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:29

    Awesome...I WAS IN THERE!
    Made my day a little bit better!
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:31

    jake do you honestly think im not gonna put u in there.....dont worry u will be reading a lot about ur self...just be patient...
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    Post by theBOSS. on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:32

    XD

    'tis awesome.

    Seriously, write more soonish, yes?
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:34

    well i have to wait for renden...
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    Post by theBOSS. on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:40

    ... yeah, sure, when we truly desperately need him renden's never on -__-;;;
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:42

    yea ur right
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    Post by D-Dei on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:46

    yea, ren nii hasnt been on for a while...

    i read part of it

    nice so far
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:48

    thanx dei!!!!
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    Post by Koneko_Bozu8 on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:50

    I got confuzed ^-^;
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:51

    how???? i will help
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    Post by knssquad on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:53

    Good fic Oh Yeah!
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    Post by RLO-CHAN on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:56

    I like it. (:
    Update soon?
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    Post by Saiyo on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:57

    it's ok i guess sorta funny got a good story line though
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:58

    well as long as u think its ok...i'll take that as a compliment!!
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    Post by Lil Kit Kat on Wed Jan 02 2008, 19:58

    Cool Fanfic! Oh Yeah!
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 20:00

    *bows*

    thank you
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    Post by Saiyo on Wed Jan 02 2008, 20:07

    Choushi wrote:well as long as u think its ok...i'll take that as a compliment!!

    oh it was...
    is there going to more to it right i always found first chaps the hardest ....yeah i read fanfic as a hobby i also help people out with ideas .....
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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 20:11

    yes there will be.....and this first chapter has been easier because i wrote it with renden...
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Wed Jan 02 2008, 20:15

    Ren-kun better hurry his ass back here than -___-
    I gotta update mine tonight again...
    I just finished chapter 6 -__-

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    Post by Choushi on Wed Jan 02 2008, 20:17

    !!!!!! YAY !!!!!!!!

    new ff!!!!! pm me when u post it plz
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    Post by Saiyo on Wed Jan 02 2008, 20:19

    Choushi wrote:yes there will be.....and this first chapter has been easier because i wrote it with renden...

    ah yes tage teaming makes every thing easier

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