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    Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by Renden2005 on Wed Dec 19 2007, 01:16

    Chapter Two) The Beginning:

    You appear in the
    sudden damnable abyss of darkness. This time it seemed to take longer
    to reach your destination, as though the black mass that your body is
    engulfed in wouldn't leave. The black slowly faded to a dark shade of
    steel grey after about ten minutes that seemed to pass in hours. Soon
    you see that you are standing in the middle of a room.
    You see the
    man who was debatably the greatest shinobi in the history of the Ninja
    World, the Yondaime Hokage, sitting at a desk writing something. He
    looks up and looks at a sword sitting about ten feet from him. He sands
    up, walks over to it, and draws this blade that looks oddly familiar to
    you. While he swings it around you read what he was writing.

    Last Will and Testiment

    I am leaving everything i have to my wife.
    I have already instructed Jiraya-sensei to give
    my soon to be born son, Uzumaki Naruto,
    the Hyoujin when he is ready for it. On a final
    note, I have put a lot of thought into who is going
    to be the Godaime Hokage, and this person will be

    That was where he left off when he stood up. You think 'The legendary
    Sannin Jiraiya???' Suddenly a woman, that you can only guess is his
    wife barges in. She says to him, "Honey, my water broke. Call Rin.",
    and the scene changes.
    As you look on, you see three people; the
    Yondaime Hokage again, a woman with lightish brown hair in a standard
    Chuunin outfit, and the Hokage's wife, who was laying down on a
    bed/table thing in labor. You turn away in disgust and you hear a
    scream, a babie's cry, and another scream. The second scream was one of
    terror and sorrow as the once pregnant woman now laid there dead with
    the man of legend on his knees next to her with tears running down his
    cheeks.
    The scene changes again and you see yourself standing
    behind the Yondaime who was holding his son and is facing the fearsome
    Kyuubi No Yoko. He uses his legendary jutsu(the Hiraishin) and equally
    legendary blade to attack the demon. He soon weakened it to the point
    of it lying on the groung in pain as he uses the Shinigami No Jutsu to
    kill himself and trap the beast inside of his newborn son.
    You then
    turn around to see the blind man again and he says, "You know of a
    small part of the beginning..." You start to speak but are cut off by
    his saying, "...now to see the rest." You are plunged into the abyss
    yet again and are sent to a training ground in Konoha.
    You see a
    second Sannin by the name of Tsunade Training Sakura. after blocking a
    punch and the ground underneath her collapsing a bit Tsunade tells her
    to stop. "I want to give ou something." She leads her into the buinding
    they were behind and you follow. she opens a chest of drawers and pulls
    out a sword. "I want you to have this Sakura." she says as she holds
    out the Eisei Blade.
    "What is it?" Sakura
    asked. "This is a blade of legend" Tsunade says, "It is asaid to beable
    to stop death by plunging the blade into said dying person's chest."
    "Wow" both you and Sakura said shocked at this. "For example." Tsunade
    says calmly as she hits Sakura in the face full force. Sakura lays
    there on the floor writhing in pain as Tsunade walks up to her and
    explains that Sakura would die soon.
    Tears roll down Sakura's face
    as she thinks about how she couldn't help bring Sasuke back after all.
    She then shows an expression of pain as Tsunade pierses her chest with
    the Eisei. Her face in a slow, but seemingly painful progress heals
    itself. After a few minutes she opens her eyes and sits up really fast.
    You are pulled away from the scene and back into nothingness.
    You
    appear in a dark room lit slightly by a few candles. You see Sasuke
    standing in front of Orochimaru's dead body. "I guess this makes me the
    owner of the Kusanagi, huh Orochimaru?" Sasuke says as he walks away
    and looks at Kabuto. Kabuto collapses as you see that Sasuke has his
    Sharingan activated. he walks out and takes the real Kusanagi. "This
    fake has been good enough until now." Sasuke claims as he swings the
    Kusanagi creating a tornadothat he jumps on and fly's off on.
    You
    return to the place you started and you look at the blnd man in front
    of you and you start to ask him what happened but he cuts you off
    again. "I must rest. Come here tomorrow if you wish to hear more."

    and there's chapter two...
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Wed Dec 19 2007, 01:17

    I think it rules. ^__^
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by Renden2005 on Wed Dec 19 2007, 01:20

    thank you...you read chapter 1 right???
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Wed Dec 19 2007, 01:25

    Hai, they both caught my intrest. Very well detailed. I loves them both.
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by Choushi on Wed Dec 19 2007, 04:15

    i have a ff too.....im gonna PM ren on this idea i have........
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by Dusk^Strife on Sun Dec 23 2007, 21:25

    i like it. i like how it goes from one part to the next (like from naruto to sakura to sasuke.) the detail is awesome, but i wish you would post sooner!!
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by KatannaSan on Wed Dec 26 2007, 04:51

    Dude, awsome! Just want to know what's with the weird formatting!

    Nice details and well thought out! I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter....
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by Renden2005 on Wed Dec 26 2007, 16:00

    weird format???you mean its in second person???
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by KatannaSan on Wed Dec 26 2007, 17:29

    No, I'm talking about right in the middle of a centence it goes into a new paragraph. I know it's no big deal, but it's a bit annoying....
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    Re: Kusanagi:The Four Swords Legend Chapter:2

    Post by Renden2005 on Wed Jan 02 2008, 22:01

    oh...i tried to fix that, but it just does that when i type it...
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