Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

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    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by D-Dei on Sat Feb 23 2008, 21:27

    lol, slow claudia
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    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Sat Feb 23 2008, 22:01

    i ish slow too ^__^'''

    ITS AWESOME!
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    The first Alice was a courageous red one
    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
    The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!

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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by D-Dei on Sat Feb 23 2008, 22:02

    lol yes you are.
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Sun Feb 24 2008, 19:35

    I'M NOT!
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:19

    New chapter, chapter 5.
    Today, maybe.
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:20

    Do it today and I'll give 5 extra stat points in each ^_^
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:21

    that's a white collar crime ^-^
    besides, that's up to my beta
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:21

    I know X3

    Dei-sama is your beta?
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:22

    mhm.
    also a cowriter.
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:23

    ^_^

    >.>;;;

    I'm attempting to make Kimiko update on our cowritten story, but she's not... -____________-

    and our email is getting clogged up with "are you going to update" pms...
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:24

    nice.

    i'm awaiting hikage's pm.
    and i'll put it up.
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:25

    yay!

    =D

    Kimiko... is unbelieveable lazy.
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:26

    i know.
    the only reason i typed 38 pages over the weekend was because my internet was down and i had nothing better to do 'cept sleep and eat
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:27

    XD

    Dei-sama told me...


    When I was in china, I typed about 20k words a day I was so bored... -__-
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    The first Alice was a courageous red one
    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
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    Post by D-Dei on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:32

    .. deathy.. aim?
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 18:39

    alright
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 21:17

    Since I promised bloodly, here. Chapter 5 up.
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    Characters (Old and New):
    Spoiler:

    Shadow:
    Kenji - punkfilter
    Xavier - Endless Nothing
    Mizuki - 2bloodly2love
    Komui - Titaniumxvx

    Sand:
    Hiro - quater
    Hotaru - Sasori-chan
    Kyou - Renden2005
    Ryohei - jake989

    Glacier:
    Hihari - DeI-kUn~
    Haruka - furaiigon
    Katsumi - Kiami
    Yukiko - Angelic Harmony
    Itami - knssquad

    Storm:
    Yukio - SilverLegionaire
    Kazune – Amaterasu
    Mikan – Claud-kun

    Mist:
    Takashi – -J0$3-
    Tsuchi – shinobi's redemption
    Spyke (code name) – spyke543

    Antagonist(s) [For now, they're just going to be called Antagonists]:
    Taiyou Kuroi (Former Shadow Hunternin, participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Akira (Kuroi's partner, participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Ryuujin (A masked man, participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Jin (Participant in revival of Project Tri-Angle)
    Keiko (A blind woman, seems to "lead" the five antagonists introduced. A participant in the revival of Project Tri-Angle)
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    A Dei&Death fanfic.

    -

    V : secrets are meant to be kept secret

    -

    after all, curiosity killed the cat.

    -

    The five powerful leaders stepped out of the cool, air-conditioned building into the scorching heat of the Hidden Sand village with a set resolve.

    “We will go to the impenetrable village of Glacier first.”

    “And after that...?”

    “We declare war.”

    Takashi grimaced. “Would that mean that we have to release our seals?”

    Hiro grinned cheerfully. “It's been a while since I did. It won't be that bad, Takashi. I mean, what other opportunity would we have, to be in full power again?”

    “Problem is,” Kenji said flatly, “We need a medic.”

    Yukio blinked. “Hey, where's Hihari?”

    “Right here.” Swiftly, the shortest of all the village leaders landed on the ground next to Hiro without any sound at all. “Itami can do that for us, she's the best medic in Glacier.”

    “The girl whose eyes change color,” Hiro observed, recognizing her shoulder-length red hair and calm butterscotch-colored eyes, which were pitch black a couple of hours ago. “A side effect to the Type 2?”

    Itami's lip curled into a small, defiant snarl while her eyes darkened in color.

    Hihari frowned. “Itami, chill. And yes, nii, it's a side effect but we shouldn't worry about that right now. Itami... if you may?”

    Her eyes returning to a calm butterscotch color, Itami lifted a hand which was now glowing brightly with medicinal chakra. She stepped forward to Hihari first, placing a hand out half an inch in front of Hihari's chest. “Kai.”

    A blinding flash erupted from Itami's hand, enveloping Hihari completely. The only thing that verified her presence was the large outburst of chakra and the sudden, second-long decrease in temperature.

    And as the light faded, the chakra leakage coming from Hihari was outstanding. Her face was practically glowing, marveling at the power that had been sealed away for so long. “We haven't been like this in such a long time, it's like all of the chakra has built up inside us.”

    “Probably,” Kenji agreed. “I'm next. I'm so damn tired of my power being cooped up in my own body.”

    As each leader welcomed the power, they bystanders were practically crippled by the sheer power radiating off of them.

    This... this is the true power of the kages...!

    “So,” Yukio stretched a bit, his chakra wavering a bit when he yawned, “Off to Glacier.”

    Hihari blinked as well when Haruka jumped beside her and whispered lowly into her ear. “Oh really?”

    Haruka nodded grimly. “I think she should stay here. Her wings are too fragile to our environment anyways.”

    Hihari turned to Hiro, a small smile. “Nii, would it be okay if one of my Glacier nin stayed here?”

    Hiro blinked. “Who?”

    “Yukiko,” Hihari called, and an instant later the said girl dropped from the sky, landing on the space in front of Hihari, her head bowed.

    “It's nothing against you and Glacier, Hihari-sama, it's just that it's so nice to find someone who understands me!”

    “You want me to allow a Type 3 to reside in Sand?” Hiro asked.

    “She can control herself, if you're asking about her stability,” Hihari replied. “It seems that she has also found someone of interest in your village.”

    Hiro laughed. “Well, Sand village is a home for natural beauties.”

    “What's his name?” Hihari asked gently.

    “Ryohei.”

    “You called?”

    Yukiko's head snapped up in surprise. “Ryohei?” she gasped at the sight of the newcomer Sand nin, blushing.

    He grinned, raking a hand through his hair. “I thought you'd need moral support.”

    Hiro grinned as well. “Well, if it's Ryohei we're talking about, welcome to the Sand village!”

    Tears leaked out of Yukiko's eyes as Ryohei bent down to hug her. “Thank you so much.”

    “Alright, back to business,” Takashi said. “First stop–”

    “Glacier,” Yukio finished.

    And they were off.

    -

    -

    Her sandaled feet made no noise at all as they practically glided across the drab stone floors to a large door. In fact, if it weren't for the almost inaudible swoosh of her cloak, it would seem like no one was there.

    Without a sound or grimace, she scraped the rough pad of her thumb on the sharp object protruding from the handle of the doorknob and waited until the door clicked open by itself after her blood had been recognized.

    “You're late, Kuroi-chan.” It was the same voice of her partner.

    “Shut up,” she retorted. “Like you haven't been late before, Akira.”

    The said man opened his mouth to talk back when a quieter voice interrupted.

    “Both of you, please. Let us just get this meeting over with.” The speaker's mouth barely seemed to move, but immediately Akira and Kuroi clamped their mouths shut and stared at the older, blind woman sitting at the most shadowed part of the round table.

    “Nice to see you too, Keiko-san,” Kuroi drawled, taking her seat next to Akira. “I see some of our other members aren't here.”

    “They are on missions and have yet to return, Kuroi-san,” Keiko replied. “It is only the five of us right now.”

    “Ryuujin,” Kuroi greeted dully to a masked figure sitting next to Keiko in the shadows.

    “Jin.” The man whose dark hair covered most of his face, sitting across from Kuroi, nodded hello.

    “So,” Ryuujin's deep, distorted voice was muffled by his mask. “What information have you gotten?”

    “Don't speak of the Project Tri-Angle info so lightly,” Kuroi scoffed. “You know how hard it was to copy all the contents of the scroll without opening it and harming its structure so no one would notice?”

    “My apologies. Please, if you may...?” It was a challenge to tell the different moods to Ryuujin's voice, so Kuroi just ignored him and fished a scroll out of the folds of her cloak.

    “Remember that since the contents of Project Tri-Angle itself has been scattered, this is only a portion of it. It was most likely written by the main creator of it, Takahashi Aki.”

    And with that, she opened the scroll, not even knowing herself what she was about to reveal to them.

    -

    -

    05 March

    Project Tri-Angle is going smoothly. We have categorized the experiments into three types.

    Type 1 can turn into animals and acquire animal-like attributes (at will, we are hoping; it has been different with the different test subjects.)

    Type 2 cannot change its own physical features into those of an animal. However, it seems to have more connections to both flora and fauna. The other day test subject 76 managed to lift a vase by growing vines from the ground!

    Type 3 was the hardest of all to manage. Instead of using existing animals to merge them with, we used creatures of our imagination like dragons, angels and demons. They have no classification at all except that the angel and demon types seem to grow angel wings that differ in color.

    This is all for now.



    24 March

    There seems to have been miscalculations in the Project. We have lost 14 test subjects in the last 19 days. It seems as if their bodies couldn't handle the sudden change; two of them, their heads literally burst. It was quite a mess, and I do not want to see it happen again. Thank the Lord that this was in the research facility, there would have been a public outcry.



    02 April

    Two teenagers, both of whom were Type 3, blew up in the streets today.



    12 April

    The deaths will not stop, they have accelerated greatly. The shinobi on duty as well as the medical ninja that had performed the autopsies are getting suspicious.

    We have lost almost half our test subjects.



    01 May

    My own child, a Type 2, has not been looking well.

    My wife is asking where I am at all the days I am supposed to be at the hospital.

    I'm scared for my family, for the project.



    02 May

    She died.

    The perfect shinobi –

    -

    -

    The dark room was silent, until a hoarse whisper full of excitement and anticipation broke the silence.

    “The perfect shinobi,” Kuroi whispered.

    -

    -

    The large group of powerful shinobi stand at a port, staring at an endless sea of glaciers.

    “Welcome,” the petite kage says, slowly lifting a hand and watching the snow melt on her glowing hand.

    Home sweet home.

    “Welcome,” she says again, reveling in the wind, the snow, the crisp and cold air. “to the Hidden Glacier Village.”

    -

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    Next time: Putting the “impenetrable” Glacier Village to the test!


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    The first Alice was a courageous red one
    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
    The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!

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    Post by D-Dei on Mon Feb 25 2008, 21:25

    neh, neh, you forgot to add Keiko in the character's list ^^
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Feb 25 2008, 21:27

    kya kya!!! yay!!!

    It was kinda boring, but who cares!

    If you want, pm a kage to exchange + 10 from my stats to yours, death-chan, like I promised ^_^
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    Post by knssquad on Mon Feb 25 2008, 21:32

    :O it's awesome
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 21:40

    HAHA, now danny has to update.

    and bloodly, which?
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by knssquad on Mon Feb 25 2008, 21:58

    -cough cough-

    nope, too busy trying to help Glacier Cowboy
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Feb 25 2008, 22:04

    Shadow's hopeless, if I may say so myself.
    Nah, maybe.
    But sure.

    Make glacier proud.
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by D-Dei on Mon Feb 25 2008, 22:10

    knssquad wrote:-cough cough-

    nope, too busy trying to help Glacier Cowboy

    lol, me too lazy right now to make the thread so danny's making it for me XD
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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by Endless Nothing on Mon Feb 25 2008, 22:14

    Well, it was an informing chapter, im more partial to action myself. But it was good none the less.

    By the way Kenji (Kurokage) isn't in the list of characters either.

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