Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

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    Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:13

    Contents (click the link ^__^)
    I : Say Goodnight
    II : Playground
    III : Fear
    IV : you'd better lock your doors and hide
    V : secrets are meant to be kept secret
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    A Dei&Death fanfic.

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    I : Say Goodnight.

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    Tonight will be your last night.

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    He flew quickly through the trees, almost flying off the branches effortlessly. Suppressing another coughing fit, he stopped to rest on a branch.

    He was careless. The branch snapped and he was tumbling down forty feet.

    “Damn–!” A torrent of kunai and shuriken flew toward him; he retaliated by pulling out a kunai of his own and deflecting the shower of weapons. However, he didn’t escape unscathed.

    Wincing, he fell onto the forest floor. He knew he was reaching his limits.

    And so did they.

    “I don’t believe this is a nin from the feared Shadow village,” a voice scoffed, high and feminine.

    “Patience, this is only an underdog. We must wait.” Another voice, a male’s.

    The dying Shadow nin coughed blood, the red liquid splattering across his vest and face. Blood was already matted in his dark hair, and the pieces of cloth he had wrapped around the hole in his side were already soaked.

    I mustn’t… let them… have the…’ His shaking hand reached into his pocket.

    The female let out a shriek of laughter. “Don’t even think about it, fool. You’re no match for us. You’re dying. We all know it. Give up the scroll willingly and I just may consider killing you quickly.”

    The Shadow nin coughed, and spat blood near the shadows, at the woman’s feet. “Rot in hell.”

    A low growl. “Why, you scum–”

    Patience. This is the typical Shadow shinobi. Staying stupidly, stubbornly loyal.” The dark voice was directed toward the Shadow nin now. “Do not be foolish. Give up the scroll.”

    A curse escaped the Shadow shinobi’s bloodied lips. “Die.”

    There was a small pause.

    Then–

    “I guess we have no choice.” A small sigh. “Now you may kill the fool. Be sure that blood does not harm the scroll. It is fragile, remember that.”

    He was dying, but… “I will never let Kurokage-sama down…” More blood flew from his mouth, his teeth stained crimson as he gritted them. His broken wrists moved into rapid handsigns.

    Eyes narrowed from the shadows. “Oi, what are you doing–?!”

    All the spilled blood mixed with the shadows, creating a translucent crimson griffin.

    “Go,” the dying man croaked hoarsely, extracting a small scroll with shaking hands and tossing it to the griffin. The scroll landed in the creature’s mouth and it swallowed; the scroll bobbing up and down in the mass of blood.

    The blood summon took flight, soaring above the treetops. The female let out an angered scream, launching a torrent of kunai and shuriken at it but they merely passed harmlessly through it.

    The Shadow nin smiled contentedly. The scroll was safe… but… something didn’t feel right…

    He looked down at his arm and screamed.

    Or… what was left of his arm anyway. It was now a mere stump of bloody flesh, blood spurting from it.

    “What did you DO?!?!”

    A maniacal chuckle from the female. “You’ve just made my job much harder. Die.”

    He blew up with a last shriek of pain, flesh and guts and blood flying everywhere, painting the forest a morbid red. The Shadow forehead protector lay on the ground, stained with blood.

    A pale hand reached out and grabbed the still pulsating heart from a now blood-stained tree.

    Smear it splendid, honey.”

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    Next chapter: The scroll arrives at the most unlikely place! And what’s this? Pointing fingers already?


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    Re: Smear it Splendid [[A Dei&Death fanfic]] Chapters 1~5

    Post by jake989 on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:21

    Wow...NICE!
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    Post by Shinobi's Redemption on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:22

    awsome
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:23

    ^__^;;;

    Hikage's idea.

    I'm merely the writer... I've written better though...

    hm... we're picking on your village next chapter jake Bwahaha
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    Post by jake989 on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:25

    Picking???
    WHY?!?!
    And who are the mystery people?
    Or what village at least or are they missing ninjas?
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:27

    secret ^_^

    picking on in a good way, jake. i think you're included next chapter... or maybe you die. i forget. actually, i haven't thought it out.
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    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:30

    i love it!
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    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
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    Post by D-Dei on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:30

    a bit bloodier? than i thought it would be, but ok ^^

    still feel guilty. T.T
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:31

    XD

    yeah, i was surprised too... this is the most blood i've put in any of my stories.

    oh well.
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    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:31

    i wonder if'll be in it o__o'
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:32

    OF COURSE YOU WILL SORI.

    You wanted to be in it. The readers wishes are my commands. Kind of.
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    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:33

    lol, awesome. i hope i get to kill Evil Glare
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:34

    durr. you and hector are going to be kickass Evil Glare Evil Plan
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    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Dec 17 2007, 19:36

    YESH, HECKTOR GETS TO BE IN IT TOO!!!

    *hugs hecktor* Evil Glare
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    Post by Meika-Chan on Mon Dec 17 2007, 21:40

    what about meeeeeeee?
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 21:45

    patience, bloodly ^__^

    i think most of the WotN people will be introduced next chapter.
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    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
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    Post by D-Dei on Mon Dec 17 2007, 21:46

    she meant the

    this sotry is bloodly thing
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 21:47

    wait, what?
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    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
    The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!

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    Post by D-Dei on Mon Dec 17 2007, 21:49

    nothing... -0-
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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 21:50

    Dazed
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Mon Dec 17 2007, 23:08

    o.O
    Your story kicks my stories ass!!!
    It's was awsome!
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    Post by Kagamiko on Tue Dec 18 2007, 13:37

    awesome ^^
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    Post by Endless Nothing on Tue Dec 18 2007, 19:15

    A splended fanfic indeed. I can not wait for the next installment.
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    Post by Titaniumxvx on Tue Dec 18 2007, 19:42

    Whoa. Intense! But their's blood. O_O...
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    Post by theBOSS. on Tue Dec 18 2007, 21:41

    of course there's blood Titan... 'tis the life of a shinobi.

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