From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

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    From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by UnknownMarauder on Sun Dec 02 2007, 14:47

    From Suna, With Love




    This is a short poem I wrote from Gaara's point of view. It's to a special somebody in Konoha. Try and figure out who it is before the last stanza!




    WwWwWwWw




    I sit here and stare at the moon,

    Thinking how it reminds me of you.

    The way it lights up the sky,

    The way you light up my life.




    The desert night seems so cold

    I pray it's warm where you are

    And that though we are far apart

    You still remember me.




    Though cruel and uncaring I may seem

    The sand, my outward shell, hides

    From the sun my true self,

    The self which you unleashed.




    You do not recoil in fear,

    Nor do you back away,

    And for that you are always

    The one whom I shall admire.




    Look at me, rambling on,

    In poet's verse, quite unnaturally.

    But for you, I feel it's worth the oddities,

    That you're worth the sentimental bit.




    My gaze is drifting from the moon,

    And I think of how it reminds me of you.

    The glowing celestial being mirrors your eyes

    Mimicking the warmth you showed me.




    Next time I am in Konoha, look for me

    And give me a smile to brighten my day.

    I send this poem, from Suna with love,

    To you, my Byakugan angel, Hinata-chan.




    ~Gaara


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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by amaterasu on Sun Dec 02 2007, 16:24

    wow didn't think of that person
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by UnknownMarauder on Sun Dec 02 2007, 16:28

    Hehehe... I like surprising peoples
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by quater on Sun Dec 02 2007, 16:32

    Yeah it sounded like Sakura I still can't see how it's Hinata... Blushing
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by UnknownMarauder on Sun Dec 02 2007, 16:41

    quater wrote:Yeah it sounded like Sakura I still can't see how it's Hinata... Blushing

    GaaSaku... Ticked ? ooh, Kazekage's blushing :P
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by quater on Sun Dec 02 2007, 16:46

    No I meant the whole stand up to me part, I never remembered Hinata standing up to him but I do remember Sakura doing it.
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by UnknownMarauder on Sun Dec 02 2007, 16:54

    Meh, I just needed more stanzas >.>

    Besides, I'm a NaruSaku fan, not GaaSaku, and I just find GaaHina kawaii ^.^
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by Renden2005 on Sun Dec 02 2007, 16:55

    UnknownMarauder wrote:Meh, I just needed more stanzas >.>

    Besides, I'm a NaruSaku fan, not GaaSaku, and I just find GaaHina kawaii ^.^

    i agree...
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by Itachistalker on Sun Dec 02 2007, 17:19

    its so pretty lol
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by UnknownMarauder on Sun Dec 02 2007, 17:55

    glad you like it ^.^
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by D-Dei on Fri Dec 07 2007, 01:11

    NaruHina...

    but its cute ^^

    i knew it was hinata when i read the 2nd to last stanza

    My gaze is drifting from the moon,

    And I think of how it reminds me of you.

    The glowing celestial being mirrors your eyes

    Mimicking the warmth you showed me.
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by Kagamiko on Fri Dec 07 2007, 05:11

    Aww... the poem's cute, but I don't like the GaaHina thing-

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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by Liily_Lavander_105 on Sat Dec 08 2007, 15:36

    Those poems were awsome!!!
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by quater on Sat Dec 08 2007, 15:55

    I really don't care either way gaara hina or whatever I just don't get where it was hinted at.
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by darkangel on Sun Dec 09 2007, 01:37

    the poem was cute..i like it
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    Re: From Suna With Love (a poem by me ^.^)

    Post by UnknownMarauder on Thu Dec 13 2007, 20:13

    I'm glad you guys liked it ^.^ I'm thinking about doing a follow-up poem with Hinata writting to Gaara. When I find time, of course >.> Should be soon, vacation's comming up

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