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    my own wotn fanfic (not in connection with the site one

    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 18:51

    (amaterasu's point of view)
    Ouside of mist village, October 13th, 7:00 am

    I watched the sun come up over the horizen, illuminating the plains of water. Far in the distance I could see them coming.
    "They're coming" I told the ones standing behind me
    "They must be over 200 at least" replied LM in Disbelief
    "I really hate this war" I said for at least the 1000th time

    It was true, I have hated this war with the sand not only because I know most of them but because of the difference in attitude. They are so serious and we are, well, apathetic.

    The three prblems this morning so far are these
    1: Jose (the mizukage) told me to lead a party of 6 people to defend these plains and stop them from entering the village.
    2: 3 of the members out here are inexperienced genin who haven't fough for real yet
    3: We have no idea how many sand ninja are attacking. PLus Quater (kazekage) is probably leading them.
    "Codiac, go back and tell Jose that sand is here and they brought an army of over 200, then help out were you can"
    "But Ama..." he started
    " JUST GO" i interrupted
    Well, thats one genin thats gone, all I can do right now is to prolonging the life of the shinobi here. I really hate this war.

    (Quaters point of view) Ouside of Mist village, October 13th 7:20

    "Q-sama, scouting report" said Seiei
    "Ok then tell me"
    "We have found that Mist have set 6 shinobi to protect the ouside of the village. 3 of them are chuunin, Air, Kisame-girl and amaterasu."
    "Very well Seiei, go get Renden, Sasori, and Koneko then you may rest."
    "Yes, Q-sama" Seiei ran off to get the 3 of them

    What is Jose thinking? Ever since the war started, the mist shinobi have declined missions and abandonned their borders. Does he have some sort of plan?
    -Renden, Sasori, and Koneko appers behind Quater.
    "Orders sir?" asked all three in union
    "Yes I want you three to capture the chuunin defending the ouside of the village"
    -Their faces were shocked. Quater walked around as if to say something but added "you guys will start this mission when we advance on the village."
    "sir, why?" asked Sasori
    "Because it'll be easier for you guys to complete it."
    "Yes sir" they said together then dissapeared just as bird sprang form their branchs and flew towards the mist.
    "Its time to end this war"
    -Quater turned around
    "Everyone" he shouted, " we're moving out."

    (amaterasu's point of view) POuside of mist village, October 13th, 7:40

    I saw the sand army coming up to us, and i've already instructed Sabaku and LM to stay away from fighting and to return to the village A.S.A.P. When the army was roughtly 10 feet infront of our position, 3 sand ninja separated from the rest and came towards us. Iknew at once what they were planning to do, I turned to Air and Kisame and yelled.
    "Go back, retreat" when something hit my back.
    the last thinng i remember was the shouts of Air and Kisame before blacking out.

    (Renden's point of view)


    I threw the chakra seal at the nearest mist ninja and caugh him square in back knocking him out. Sasori and Koneko had already gone towards him but the other two had already escaped. I decided to get this one locked up and get him back to the sand.
    "Renden, Sasori, Koneko take him back to sand, your fight is done" ordered Quater
    Crap, and I was thinking i'd get to fight.

    Storm Village, October 13th 8:30

    -There was a knock on the door.
    "Come in" said Silver.
    -When the door opened, SIlver saw a girl dressed in a white and light blue cloak with a hat that covered her face. On the front of the hat there was the symbol for ice. She was the Hikage
    "Dei" said Silver,"so nice of you to come"
    "Cut the citchat and tell me why you wanted me to visit you?"
    "Ah yes, its about the Mist and Sand, and what we are going to do about this."
    "Oh? what is it?"
    " I just got news that Sand has destroyed Mist"
    -Shocked by this news, Dei tried to compose herself. So many questions that need to be answered
    "What of the survivors, and Shadow?"
    " Well the Shadow has surrended after hearing about the Mist. Quater however let Mist surrender so not all of the Mist shinobi are lost but they had to watch their village being burned to the ground."
    "Why did he do that?"
    "Apparently he doesn't want to destroy the only ofter village to survive our invasion."
    -Its true that Mist and Sand survived the invasion by Storm, GLacier, and Shadow. But when Mist sided with Sand's enemy, the Shadow, Quater decided to get Storm and Glacier on his side. Because of this things have been growing tense, no one new it at the time but this agreement would spark one of the worst wars every seen.
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    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:02

    wow, great title there ama :P

    anyways, yeah...post chapter 2 soon ^^
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:04

    after i finish it
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    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:06

    yay
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    Post by Titaniumxvx on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:06

    Awesome......Yeah, I'm sure chapter 2 will be be cool...

    Mist might even defeat sand. Wouldn't that pwn........

    Titan is staying tuned in!!
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:07

    Titaniumxvx wrote:Awesome......Yeah, I'm sure chapter 2 will be be cool...

    Mist might even defeat sand. Wouldn't that pwn........

    Titan is staying tuned in!!

    your in the next chapter btw
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    Post by Titaniumxvx on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:09

    me? huh?

    Awesome....yet ...please don;t make me look bad. ^____^
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    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:10

    really?

    must be the part i didn't read....at the end of english....
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:11

    Titaniumxvx wrote:me? huh?

    Awesome....yet ...please don;t make me look bad. ^____^

    no not yet... i mean no not at all lol

    don't worry you won't die
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    Post by Titaniumxvx on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:14

    what's that supposed to...lol...nvermind
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    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:14

    hey have you read over you second chapter yet?
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:19

    well its not finished yet
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    Post by theBOSS. on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:23

    nicee ^_^

    to bad I didn't stay a hobonin for this...

    why must i get high off stupid stuff...
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:25

    your ion chapter 2 aswell
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    Post by theBOSS. on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:27

    lemme guess, as shadow? T.T

    I KNOW! you're going to kill me off =D
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:30

    well i havn't really thought baout you yet so i don't know
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    Post by theBOSS. on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:31

    as long as you don't make me wear pink, i'm fine Oh Yeah!
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 19:33

    lol why would i do that?
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    Post by AirElement on Fri Nov 30 2007, 20:23

    Happy yeah!
    my name was mentioned in there!
    haa-zahh!
    *waiting for chapter 2*
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    Post by amaterasu on Fri Nov 30 2007, 20:34

    yeah i'll get chapter two up soon don't worry
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:04

    Ohh..Very nice Rasu-kun!
    *waves flag*
    WOOT!
    Oh Yeah!
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    Post by quater on Sat Dec 01 2007, 10:47

    Yeah well I am in chapter 1!

    And Sand wasn't serious, we just wanted to have fun...

    (By the way Make Titan look bad!)

    EDIT: by the way awesomely written even if I am teh villain ^_^
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    Post by amaterasu on Sat Dec 01 2007, 12:55

    quater wrote:Yeah well I am in chapter 1!

    And Sand wasn't serious, we just wanted to have fun...

    (By the way Make Titan look bad!)

    EDIT: by the way awesomely written even if I am teh villain ^_^

    lol villan lol
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    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Sat Dec 01 2007, 15:05

    nice

    I hope you use my "suggestion"......
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    Post by Friesenator on Sat Dec 01 2007, 15:24

    Wow Ama-Chan, Awesome story! I should have known you were a creative writer ^-^

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