sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

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    sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Nov 26 2007, 15:02

    Okay, i dont know any japanese, so don't yell at me if there are mistakes in the sentance structure or spelling. And i swear on the life of me that it will get better. Thank you.

    nani- what
    sochi- son
    naze- what
    fuka- wrong
    ho-muinpuru-bumento- Hi


    The sun spilled down upon the field. Flowers bloomed and critters scurried about. It was around 7 in the morning and a little girl sat directly in the center of the field busily writing in a small yellow note book. Her pen made slight scratching noises as it moved across the paper, from left to right. A boy, the same age, knelt down in front of the little girl. She did not look up, but continued writing. The boy tilted his head.

    “Hello?”

    He whispered cautiously. The girl remained writing.

    What is she doing..?

    The boy questioned to himself. He lifted his hand slowly and extended it slowly. He moved forward carefully until his finger rested upon the girl’s forehead. The girl suddenly stopped writing and slowly brought her eyes up to his.

    “Yes?” she asked in a quiet, shy voice.


    “What... what are you doing?”

    “Writing.”

    “About what?”

    “A life.”


    “A biography?”

    "Kind of.”

    “Whose?”


    The little girl sat up and clutched the note book to her chest. Her eyes sparkled.

    “A boy named Kano Sakana.”

    The boy’s eyes widened.

    “Nani?!”

    He looked at the girl intensely. She stood and turned to face the east. She started to glide away, but before she had fully gone, she said without looking back, “Kano Sakana.

    The boy stood up and ran back to his home. He looked back to see if the girl was following him, she wasn’t. He dashed into the house and plopped onto the couch breathing heavily.

    Sochi, naze fuka?”

    “Kotonashi”

    “Okay, we’ll, breakfast is almost ready.”

    “Okay mother.”

    The boy got up off the couch and made his way to the room him and his sister Yura shared.

    He opened the door to see Yura sitting on her bed reading.

    “Ho-muinpuru-bumento Yura-imooto.”

    “Ho-muinpuru-bumento Kano-Nii. You look like you just saw a ghost.”

    He lowered himself next to her.

    “I think I did...”


    CHAPTER 2:
    “HAHA!” She threw Kano against a wall, his head slamming against it.


    “Kano you are such a loser!”

    she laid a hard punch into his gut then let him drop to the floor. Kano kneeled over, wheezing.

    “Wh-what was.. That for.?” He hacked up blood.

    “Shizuko..” a girl next to the one beating up Kano whispered.

    “What is it Hihari?”

    “Bells about to ring..”

    “Ah crud. It was fun, Kano. Hope to see you soon!” she said with a sly, evil grin. Hihari glared at Kano and walked to the next class.

    Kano Shakily stood and gathered his things. He wobbly limped to his next class. As he took his seat he was tapped on the shoulder.

    “..eh..?” He spoke dizzily.

    “What’s with the blood?”

    “It’s nothing.” Kano smiled weakly. Jin, the boy who showed concern lifter his eyebrow.

    “I’m pretty sure you don’t spontaneously bleed. On a regular basis that is.”


    “It was just Shizuko and Hihari..”

    “Again? Dude, seriously. That’s a disgrace. Shizuko is a shrimp and Hihari just stands there unless you make her mad.”

    “Well it’s not like I’m partial to beating up girls.”

    “you should still tell the Sensei..”

    “Be a snitch? Never.”

    “Alright fine.”

    *****************************************************

    School have just let out and Kano was walking along the road, kicking a stone or can. He walked by the forest he usually cut through, but instead he decided to take the long way back home. He wanted to think about the day.

    Why do Shizuko and Hihari always bother me..? It’s like they want me to die.. I wouldn’t be surprised if they had voodoo dolls of me..

    His thoughts were interrupted but a rustle in the bush.

    Huh?

    A swirl of sunny yellow whooshed behind a tree.

    What the..?

    Kano quietly snuck from tree to tree. Once he was a few feet away from the tree he hear another noise. He quickly hide behind the nearest tree. He slowly turned his head to see if he could see the source of the noise.

    “HOLY--”


    “Hi!” the girl with the yellow notebook cooed with a smile on her face.

    “You just gave me a heart attack!” he screeched, his head still spinning from surprise.

    “I’m sorry.” she said in a soft voice, “Would you like me to walk you home?”

    She extended her hand. Kano looked at it for a few moments, squinting. Suddenly he heard familiar voices. He looked up and saw Shizuko and Hihari walking, they seemed to be arguing. Kano quickly took the girls hand and dragged her along through the forest until they were halfway to his house.

    “What was the rush?” she asked stopping.

    Kano tried to pull her along but she wouldn’t budge.

    “People back there. I didn’t want them to see you.”

    “Embarrassed by me already? Aw, but we just met.”

    “no, They’re dangerous.”

    Kano went to pull the girl again, this time she flung forward, the notebook flew into a thorn book.

    “Oh no!” she gasped.

    She ran to the bush and looked for the notebook. Kano walked over to the bush and stood next to her. She lifted her hand. Kano stared blankly until he saw the hand reaching for the bush. He grabbed her arm.

    “what do you think you’re doing?”

    “Getting back the notebook!”

    “Can’t you just leave it and get a new one?”

    She gave him a stern look. Kano sighed and reached into the bush. Thorns stuck into his arms. As he pulled the note book out, he winced. His arm was shaky from the pain of the punctures.

    Chapter 3:
    “ow.. Ow.. OW.. OW!!!”

    “sorry.. Sorry.. Just hold still.”

    Kano winced as the girl plucked the thorns from his arm.

    “you know,” she began, “you really didn’t have to do that.”

    “It’s the least I could do.. We just met and all.”

    “to tell you the truth, Kano. I’ve known you your whole life.”

    Kano gave a blank stare. He squinted.

    “What??”

    The girl held up the yellow flowered notebook. Kano reached for it. She quickly jerked back and shook her head no.


    “why can’t I see it?”

    “It’s to dangerous, some people can’t handle there futures.”

    “huh?”

    “never mind.. You wouldn’t understand.”

    “I can try..”

    “It isn’t worth the time.”

    “fine..”

    There was a silence for a few moments.

    “I don’t even know your name..”

    Kano muttered.
    “Rifu Jibingju.”


    “Life giving?”

    “Hai.”

    “sugoi.”

    “Hai.”

    ******************************************************
    “Mom?”

    “What is it?”

    “I’m home.”

    “what took you so long?”

    “Uh.. Detour.”

    Yura can waltzing in and skipped around Kano.

    “Nii’s got a girlfriend Nii’s got a girlfriend!”

    Kano just stared blankly.

    “I do not.”

    Yura giggled and strutted away. Kano gave her a small, unnoticeable glare then turned and plopped onto the couch and sighed.
    What am I going to do about this..?
    Suddenly he heard felt a pebble hit his head. Another, then another, and another.

    What is that?

    He turned and looked out the open window; a pebble hit his forehead.

    “Gomen!!” Rifu said in a loud whisper, “I need to talk to you!”

    Kano dashed from the house to Rifu’s spot, hoping his family wouldn’t see.

    “what do you want?” he asked in a slightly annoyed tone.

    “I wanted to tell you more about the note book.”

    “Okay, shoot.”

    “Well, It’s a place where I write.. Journal entries sorta.”

    “Is that why you wouldn’t let me see it?”

    “Kinda..”

    Kano gave a puzzled look. Rifu stroked the notebook with her thumb.

    “It’s like a journal of.. Other people’s lives.”

    “What’s the purpose of that?”

    “It’s my job.”

    “you get paid for making up stories about other people?!”

    “No.. I don’t get paid, and I do not make them up. Well.. I do in a way, but it isn‘t fictional.”

    “what do you mean..”
    His eyes narrowed.

    “I..”

    “Yes..?”

    “I write what peoples futures are!”

    Kano’s eye twitched.

    “This isn’t a funny joke.”

    “It isn’t meant to be a joke, Kano.”

    She sighed and held out the note book to him. He took it.

    “I can determine when, where, and how. I could make you live forever, send you back in time, change your past, erase you even. If a page rips out of a persons life journal, they forget about whatever was on that page, like it never happened.”

    Kano starred. He studied Rifu.

    “Why.. Did you tell.. Me?”

    “Because I made you a trust worthy person.”

    you made me?

    “yep. I decided how you would look, and what you’d act like. Just like everyone else.”

    “You can’t be nearly as young as you look..”

    “I’m 4,000 years old.”

    “Holy ..”
    “I’m just trapped in this form, it’s the way I made myself.”

    “But then you’re..”


    CHAPTER 4:

    Rifu clamped her hand over his mouth.

    “Hush.. I sense something..”

    A deep voice rang through the forest faintly. It seemed to moan and wail as if in pain.

    “Dang it..”

    Rifu muttered as she turned towards the noise.

    “What the heck is that?”

    Kano whispered.

    “I touched you so now you have the power to hear the deceased passing forth to me.”

    passing to you?”

    “yep.”

    She held up a small brown bag.
    It had black print on it.

    Kontan?”

    “Hai.”

    Rifu opened the bag and the wailing noise disappeared into the depths of the bag.

    Kano gave her a strange look.

    “what?”

    She asked closing the bag.

    “uh, nothing..”

    “Okay then. Well, we better get out of the forest.”

    “Where should we go?”

    “Hmm.. The park!”

    Rifu grabbed Kano’s hand and dragged him along to the nearest park then pushed him onto a bench and sat next to him. Kano appeared dazed then settled.

    “Uh.. Now what?”

    “well, Maybe we could ju-”

    The ground started to shake and Rifu fell from the bench. Kano bent down next to her and helped her up.

    “what was that?”

    Rifu’s eyes widened.

    “It’s.. him..”

    “him..?”

    Rifu squeezed her eyes shut, tears rolled down her face.
    “No..” she whimpered.

    “what? What!?”

    Rifu leaned over touching her forehead to the ground, gripping her head.
    “GO AWAY!”

    She screeched.

    Kano panicked. He looked around quickly for some one to help when he saw someone he recognized. He cupped his hands around his mouth and shouted.

    “HAYATO!!!”

    CHAPTER 5:
    Hayato spun around.
    “Huh?”
    “Come here!”
    “What? Why?”
    “Just come here.”
    “No?”
    Kano glared. Hayato immediately walked over to Kano. Kano sighed, Then pointed to Rifu. Hayato tilted his head.
    “What’s it doing?”
    “It just so happens to be a SHE.” Kano said angrily, “And.. I have no idea what she’s doing.”
    Hayato Scratched his chin.
    “Seizure?”
    “Be serious.” Kano said with a mocking tone.
    “okay, Okay.” Hayato got on his knees then grabbed a stick. He poked Rifu Several times with it, then stood. Kano snatched the stick.
    “Will you stop it!” he shouted throwing the stick aside. Hayato pouted.
    “That was a nice stick.”
    Kano scoffed. Hayato stared. Both of them continued to bicker, not noticing Rifu sitting cross legged watching. She started humming softly. Kano and Hayato heard and stopped, they both looked to Rifu.
    “Rifu!” kano said jumping on her, “Are you okay?”
    Rifu fell with Kano on top of her. “yes,” She smiled, “I am fine.” She pushed him over onto his back, then got up and brushed herself off. She held he hand out to Hayato and he took it.
    “Hiyo, I am Rifu. And you are Hayato! Born on October 10, 1994! At 3:43 on a Saturday!” she said cheerily.
    “I am...” He said slowly. “Nice to.. Meet you..”
    “Likewise.”
    She bounded to Kano and pulled him up, then took him by the hand and dragged him out of the park. They came to a stop in front of Kano’s house. Kano blinked, then scratched the back of his head.
    “what was with the Spasm?”
    “That park..”
    “what about it?”
    “It has a…”
    “a what?”
    “An aura.”
    Kano stared.
    “Aura?”
    “a bad one. I think there’s an.. “it” there..”
    “an.. “it”?”
    “Yes, you know..”
    “No, I don’t..”
    Rifu took a piece of paper out of her pocket and handed it to kano. He read it, then his eyes went wide.
    “Whoa.. In the park?”
    “Yeah.”
    She scratched her head.
    “And we have to go there again. And close it.”
    “But you’ll freak again.”
    “I’ll wear this..”
    Rifu Reached into her pocket and pulled out a necklace. It had a small purple gem on it in the shape of a diamond. She put it on, then grabbed his hand and yanked him to the park.


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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Anei Kitsune on Mon Nov 26 2007, 15:29

    ooooohhh. chillls!

    haha. jk. i like it. ^_^ nice job sori-chan!! Oh Yeah!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Anei Kitsune on Mon Nov 26 2007, 15:30

    ooooohhh. chillls!

    haha. jk. i like it. ^_^ nice job sori-chan!! Oh Yeah!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by D-Dei on Sat Dec 01 2007, 22:44

    o.O;; i'm interested :D
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Dec 01 2007, 22:46

    is he going to die in the end? =D
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    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by D-Dei on Sat Dec 01 2007, 22:48

    oh gosh.. not another death note, neh?
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Sun Dec 02 2007, 01:12

    no. he doesnt die in the end. and it isnt a death note.
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    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
    The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!

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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by D-Dei on Sun Dec 02 2007, 20:29

    yea, it just seems like it.. -0-;;
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by quater on Sun Dec 09 2007, 16:36

    Well I liked it.
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Banouin on Thu Dec 13 2007, 18:27

    I love it!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Q on Mon Dec 17 2007, 20:12

    sono = that
    yellow = kiiroi
    notebook = nooto
    sochi = is very rarely used
    naze = why/how
    ho-muinpuru.... = never heard that in my life.
    if you want to say what's wrong, you would normally say doushitano
    sakana = fish
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Dec 17 2007, 20:22

    I said i didn't knoe japanese Damn It!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 20:23

    i wish i did =D

    btw you better update soon sori ^__^
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    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
    The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!

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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by D-Dei on Mon Dec 17 2007, 20:23

    i wanna know too

    and yea you'd better :D
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by jake989 on Mon Dec 17 2007, 20:34

    YEAH!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Mon Dec 17 2007, 20:53

    NEW CHAPPIE!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Dec 17 2007, 20:56

    OH, YEAHH, I BEAT UP PEOPLE!!!

    Oh Yeah!
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    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
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    Except the red path that followed behind her

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    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by D-Dei on Mon Dec 17 2007, 23:10

    cool!

    so we're like the.. bullies?
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Mon Dec 17 2007, 23:12

    AWSOME story!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Renden2005 on Tue Dec 18 2007, 02:05

    i like it a lot Sori-chan...tis good...
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Dec 18 2007, 22:12

    NEW CHAPPIE!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Tue Dec 18 2007, 22:16

    DAMN CLIFFY!!!!
    Damn It!

    BUT I LOVE IT!!!!
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Tue Dec 18 2007, 22:17

    It's awesome.

    If he doesn't die...wait, huh?
    Can't wait until next chapt.
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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by theBOSS. on Wed Dec 19 2007, 18:06

    that evil cliffie.

    damn you.
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    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

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    Re: sono koushoku zakkichou ((The Yellow Notebook))

    Post by D-Dei on Wed Dec 19 2007, 19:23

    another cliffy.. T.T

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