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    Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:34

    Okay, well I usually make my stories on Quizilla, but I guess I can make one here too ^-^'
    Now, if my characters are OOC, excuse me for it please? I sometimes get out of hand. Arigatou! Oh, and I added some people from WOTN in here! ^-^
    Kiami is Maeko((Truth child))
    Snow-kun is Toshiro((Talented))
    Poe-kun is Reizo((Calm; Cool; Well-groomed))


    Silence surrounded the dense forest just outside of Konoha's gates. A younge Konoichi still against a hollow tree as she panted softly from the lack of breath.

    "You really think she went through here," one missing-nin asked his partner, who looked in deep concentration.

    "Yes, I can feel her. Her chakra is running low, but it's there," he answered in a cold whisper. His red eyes scanning the thick trunks of the trees, the tree tops making sure that no shadows were unseen, even looking low, with every rustle in a bush being searched.

    "Yo, Itachi, what if she already went into Konoha?" Kisame asked irritably, placing his huge sword against his shoulder.

    Itachi glared at the forest for a bit more before turning his gaze to meet Kisame's. "Your probably right. That's what a smart one would do. We'll get her sooner or later. Even if she didn't go into those gates, she'll die in a matter of ours. Too many wounds to the body," Itachi stated factly, walking away while placing his straw hat over his head, Kisame following after.

    "Yeah, let the squirt die. She's too much trouble," Kisame snidely remarked. "Plus, she hasn't eaten for days."

    Maeko, the konoichi hiding against the tree, sighing tiredly and slumping down on the branch. "That was close. Those idiots, really thinking I'd be stupid enough to run away and not take food with me? Ha! And they call themselves the top missing-nin's. Big jokes," she laughed, jumping down from the high branch and landing on her feet after a small tumbling stop. "So, Konoha? If they say it's safe, let's really see..."

    Walking up to the gates cautiously, looking back at every step she took, she looked up at the gaurds standing before her. "State your business," one demanded, not rudely, but enough to show he wasn't playing around.

    "I'm a travler looking for a place to stay..." She answered immediaty, pleasing the gaurds.

    "Than you will need to see the 5th Hokage first. Name?" The second asked, starting to walk forward through the doors.

    "Hiname Maeko," she answered once again, taking in the comfty features of the village. "What country are we in?"

    "The fire country. What Konoichi dosn't know that?" He asked incredulously.

    Maeko shurgged embarrassingly. She had never been in the outside world for long. As soon as she was born, she was handed over to a foster family. And when they died, her only 7, she wondered around the forest aimlessly and was captured and made a slave for the Akatsuki. "I didn't get out much where I lived," she said, somewhat truthfully.

    The gaurd half nodded, looking back forward and reaching a tall building, climbing a few steps before reaching a door. Soon she was surrounded by shadow as she entered the cooling building, still following the gaurd, up another flight of stairs. "Here we are. Hold on one minute," she said sternly.

    Maeko nodded, looking around the building, listening closely as she heard the gaurd knock softly on a door, then a hoarse reply coming coming from behind it.

    "Go ahead. You can handle it from here," he said, walking away, heading back to his post.

    "Arigatou..." she muttered, twisting the knob and stepping into the room unasure if she should just leave. "Hello?" She shyly whispered.

    "Come in fully. I don't bite," a blonde haired woman said smiling friendly.

    Maeko twitched a small smile, stepping in full and closing the door softly behind her. She walked forward, bowing respectfully as she stared at the hokage in the eyes.

    "How may I help you...Umm."

    "Maeko. Hiname, Maeko. I wish to stay in Konoha...If that is okay...?"

    "Ahh, well, welcome Maeko. I am Tsunadae, and it is fine to stay. Let me just find somewhere that you can stay," Tsunadae said sweetly. She shuffled through some papers that were piled on her desk, pulling out a thick folder and opening it quickly. Then once again shuffling through more papers. "Ahh! Here we go. Before I tell you where your staying, how old are you? Did you participate in a academy before? And if you did, do you know your rank?"

    Maeko racked up the questions in order in her brain, then took a breath, "I am 13 years old, no I have never particapated in an academy before, and I don't know my rank." She admitted.

    Tsunadae nodded, writing down some information before looking up and throwing a pair of keys Maeko's way. "Wait another minute," Tsunadae not really asked, but commanded.

    Wrapping a message around a messanger birds foot, they waited about 15 minutes before 2 boys entered through the door, boring before Tsunadae. "Toshiro, Reizo, meet your new team mate, Hiname, Maeko."

    Toshiro looked like he was about to protect before Tsundae shot him an annoyed look. Sighing in defeat, Toshiro glared at Maeko lightly, who glared right back.

    "Okay now kids, you aren't 6," Reizo said laughing.

    "Now go on, show her around the village too!" Tsunadae yelled after the three ninja's.

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    ((Outside the building))

    "Well, I'm Jinri, Reizo. And this stubborn ninja is Kirou, Toshiro," Reizo said kindly, bowing before Maeko, who blushed shyly.

    "Nice to meet you," Maeko said, clearing making out that she wasn't too fond on getting to know Toshiro. "How old are you?" She said, clearing seeing that he wasn't of her age.


    Reizo laughed, placing a hand on his head embarrassingly, "I'm 14 1/2. Toshiro's 13."

    "Oh, well you look older than that. About 15 or so...your tall...Anyway, I'm 13 too," Maeko said.

    "That's-" He was cut off when Maeko was suddenly bumped into and thrown to the floor.

    "What the-" she started to yell, glaring at what bumped into her. A boy with Raven black hair and cold black eyes. "Watch where your going, you blind bat!" Maeko yelled.

    "Hn," He replied coldly, getting up and dusting himself off, walking away with his hand in his pockets.

    "Who the hell was that!?" Maeko yelled, getting up with Reizo's help.

    "Uchiha, Sasuke. He really dosn't get along with anyone. And by the looks of it, you already made his bad list," he said with a smile.

    "Good. Because he surely made mine," Maeko hissed, glaring at the direction that Sasuke walked off in. "I'll get him back for it..."

    "Whatever, think evil plans later. Let's go, we still need to show you around and to your apartment," Toshiro joined in, rolling his eyes.

    "Yea, let's go..." Reizo said, starting to wlak away.

    Maeko followed after, plotting in her head how to get back at the Uchiha.


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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by theBOSS. on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:45

    Wow, maeko has skills to escape from the great Akatsuki XD
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:50

    Lol, she's been there for 6 years
    she's gonna find a way sooner or later
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by theBOSS. on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:51

    lol

    hope maeko does some ass-kicking soon
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:52

    Oh, she will ^-^

    To Sasuke!!!
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by theBOSS. on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:54

    that chicken-butt-hair-head needs some humbleness...


    lol, other than that, i'm kinda a fem so... i can't stand guys being jerks ><

    I'm going to really like Maeko.
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:56

    Lol, it reminds me of Kiami
    Exactly why I based Maeko off of her
    Kiami hates getting pushed around

    And she's do anything to kick Sasuke's ass
    So, I'm gonna get the 2nd out later
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by theBOSS. on Thu Nov 15 2007, 18:58

    lol

    doesn't every girl?
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Nov 15 2007, 19:03

    No my best friend
    shes nuts for Sasuke
    *Whispers* a BIG fangirl
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by theBOSS. on Thu Nov 15 2007, 19:06

    o.O

    Wow... A... Sasuke fangirl?


    No one will push death around. Or Maeko. Except for the Cookie Lord.
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Nov 15 2007, 19:09

    Lol, yup

    Cookie!
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Kiami on Fri Nov 16 2007, 17:54

    Sweet! awsome!
    I liked it Harmony-chan!
    10 *Two Thumbs*
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Lunami on Mon Nov 19 2007, 16:32

    Me like... Plus I'm in it xD
    Reizo acts so much like me xD

    10/5... But that isn't an option, so I guess 5 will do xD
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by sasukesgirl on Thu Nov 22 2007, 12:18

    you have heard of quizilla
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Star_Light_Moon on Sat Nov 24 2007, 01:49

    I think it was good

    ^__^

    Do you have a quizilla account?
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Kiami on Thu Nov 29 2007, 00:25

    I have Quizlla!!
    I share with Charm-chan((Angelic Harmony))

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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Yoyo on Fri Nov 30 2007, 02:32

    I love how no one reads the part that says:
    Angelic Harmony wrote:Oh, and I added some people from WOTN in here! ^-^
    Kiami is Maeko((Truth child))

    Snow-kun is Toshiro((Talented))
    Poe-kun is Reizo((I forgot what it means, but I'll check later))
    Oh Yeah!
    Pretty awesome!
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 01 2007, 00:57

    Yuriishi_Yhun wrote:I love how no one reads the part that says:
    Angelic Harmony wrote:Oh, and I added some people from WOTN in here! ^-^
    Kiami is Maeko((Truth child))

    Snow-kun is Toshiro((Talented))
    Poe-kun is Reizo((I forgot what it means, but I'll check later))
    Oh Yeah!
    Pretty awesome!

    Lol, Imma add a few more people

    Dei-san, Death-chan, and Q-sama are another team

    Than You, Kns-chan, and Jake-kun are another

    Your team mates are from the Star village

    and they are from the Moon village

    ^-^
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Yoyo on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:00

    Angelic Harmony wrote:
    Yuriishi_Yhun wrote:I love how no one reads the part that says:
    Angelic Harmony wrote:Oh, and I added some people from WOTN in here! ^-^
    Kiami is Maeko((Truth child))

    Snow-kun is Toshiro((Talented))
    Poe-kun is Reizo((I forgot what it means, but I'll check later))
    Oh Yeah!
    Pretty awesome!

    Lol, Imma add a few more people

    Dei-san, Death-chan, and Q-sama are another team

    Than You, Kns-chan, and Jake-kun are another

    Your team mates are from the Star village

    and they are from the Moon village

    ^-^

    Seriously?? That's awesome!! I'm so glad people think enough of me to put me in their stories!!
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by jake989 on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:05

    Wow who would I be?
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:15

    jake989 wrote:Wow who would I be?

    you are Rioku
    You are all Chuunin already
    You are the leader of the group
    I'll explain your powers when I get the chapter out
    Im writing it now


    Yurii-san, your Rinea
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by jake989 on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:21

    Angelic Harmony wrote:
    jake989 wrote:Wow who would I be?

    you are Rioku
    You are all Chuunin already
    You are the leader of the group
    I'll explain your powers when I get the chapter out
    Im writing it now


    Yurii-san, your Rinea

    I love the name and the story!
    It's great!
    Both of them!
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:22

    jake989 wrote:
    Angelic Harmony wrote:
    jake989 wrote:Wow who would I be?

    you are Rioku
    You are all Chuunin already
    You are the leader of the group
    I'll explain your powers when I get the chapter out
    Im writing it now


    Yurii-san, your Rinea

    I love the name and the story!
    It's great!
    Both of them!

    Hehehe...
    Thanks

    Lol, im writing the part where your team comes in now ^-^
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by jake989 on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:23

    Ok kool I won't bother you anymore so you can write!

    Ohh...and guess what...I got more posts!
    HAHAHAHA!
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    Re: Choosing The Right Path

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 01 2007, 01:33

    -.-

    NOT FOR LONG!

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