Naruto in the Future

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    yondaime2
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    Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Thu Nov 15 2007, 11:33

    Many years in the future of
    Naruto…






    The houses pass in a blur as
    Hayako runs past. A black shadow moves a few yards ahead of him running while
    leaving behind explosive tags for Hayako. As one of the tags explodes near
    Hayako, he disappears with a puff. A clone. Suddenly a hand reaches out of the
    ground just ahead of the dark figure and grabs its ankle. The dark figure
    falls. Hayako fully emerges from the ground. He is short and has wide
    shoulders. His eyes are bright orange with a yellow pupil.




    Suddenly three more black
    figures appear.



    “You’re not—those eyes… it’s
    the Kyukugan! Run!!!”



    “Too late,” Hayako replies.


    Hayako flickers and suddenly
    appears behind them. His eyes start to swirl and suddenly the three men are
    enveloped in red flames.






    -Flashback-


    Hinata says to Naruto, “Our
    child’s birth went well but his eyes…”



    “What’s wrong?!” Naruto
    yells.



    “Nothing is wrong. The doctor
    says that the Kyuubi chakra and the Byakugan have created a new
    bloodline-eye-technique. They call it the Kyukugan.”



    -Flashback-





    To be continued…


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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by Yoyo on Thu Nov 15 2007, 12:27

    *blink*
    Cheese...
    That's pretty interesting....
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Thu Nov 15 2007, 19:48

    thnx
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Mon Nov 26 2007, 12:31

    why is no one posting feedback -__- Darn...
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by ItachiUchiha on Mon Nov 26 2007, 20:41

    nice!!!!!!
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Tue Nov 27 2007, 01:46

    thankyou

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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by Temari-Sensei on Wed Dec 05 2007, 23:06

    very good, but one question. Why the Kyukugan? Is it because of the nine tails? Interesting.
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by Renden2005 on Wed Dec 05 2007, 23:30

    kool...but i prefer Gaa/Hina...
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by quater on Thu Dec 06 2007, 17:00

    Gaa/hina? That's a freedoming pairing how does that even come close to sense? Heck I would think Lee and Hinata as a better...

    Moving on, don't take this the wrong way, but I found the Kyukugan kinda funny, like if it wasn't meant to be super sorry, but it kinda came across humerous. Almost like a Naruto parody.
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by FantacyOfNaruto on Thu Dec 06 2007, 17:02

    omg.........awsome
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by loofy on Thu Dec 06 2007, 21:30

    cool.
    i like the kyukugan idea.
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Sun Dec 09 2007, 17:01

    thnx guys
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by FantacyOfNaruto on Sun Dec 09 2007, 18:47

    awsome.....can i borrow that word?
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by SkadiHime on Mon Dec 10 2007, 14:05

    Hmm... very interesting... Hi
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Mon Dec 10 2007, 14:55

    sure u can borrow it
    and thnx for the great feedback everyone.
    join the hidden storm village skadihime
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by SkadiHime on Mon Dec 10 2007, 15:00

    Actually, I already have, I'm just waiting for comfirmation... ^_^
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Mon Dec 10 2007, 15:03

    Sweet!!! did anyone refer you
    ps we should continue this conversation on pm
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by FantacyOfNaruto on Thu Dec 13 2007, 13:41

    Hi ppl oh yeah im writing a story using the word and i gave credit to you
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Fri Dec 14 2007, 02:39

    ok thnx
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by FantacyOfNaruto on Sat Dec 15 2007, 16:08

    omg ppl like the word and keep asking how you made it up and i said join wayoftheninja to meet yondaime2 to see how he made it^^
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Wed Jan 23 2008, 22:32

    awesome
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by Venomu Veis on Thu Jan 24 2008, 05:21

    That was the first time iv'e laughed in a while.
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by yondaime2 on Sat May 10 2008, 19:52

    it wasn't supposed to be funny but at least i got some kind of reaction

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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by Atokata Okami on Sun May 11 2008, 14:04

    i would like to know how did kyubi was able to affect the blood of naruto. giving way to mixed and new bloodline. just know i'm not questioning your good work
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    Re: Naruto in the Future

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Mon May 12 2008, 13:00

    I liked it. It was pretty cool to me.

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